Reviews for Naruto: Hands Of Destiny
Hikari-yokubo chapter 36 . 9/14/2019
I enjoyed this throughly and the ONLY thing I would change would be the ending. I would have liked if naruto died in the end but that’s just my personal opinion.
kekbekmekflekwek chapter 2 . 8/25/2019
Ever heard of a fucking comma? They go before names in dialogue? They help break up dialogue, making it seem like real people are talking. They help break up your shitty run-on sentences, too. Retard.
Kel000 chapter 3 . 7/28/2019
I think it’s extremely annoying how Jiraiya still hasn’t told naruto who is father is considering that he’s “dying” like really? He doesn’t know how much time naruto has left to live and he still doesn’tell Him?! Naruto has had no relatives his whole life and to not tell him about his parents , Jiraiya would’ve basically let naruto die without telling him who his parents were but we all know he isn’t gonna die
Wes1382 chapter 36 . 5/23/2019
Such a great story. *claps*
Guest1908 chapter 12 . 12/13/2018
The last time I cried was when a person close to me died but at the end of this chapter I also couldn't help but pick a few tears away. I thank you for an amazing story thus far.
OneAppleLeaf chapter 36 . 10/29/2018
I'd be honest, I really like this story at first...
But the pregnancy thing is just...well anyway sp far it's good but after the exam it seems kind of rushed(?)
Why is Naruto so easily beaten by Deidara by just one explosion? I mean, I think we haven't seen the result of his training yet. Where was all that powerful justsus and tactics? x,,D
Well I already read the Madara part and at least he beat him...
Guest chapter 2 . 9/7/2018
I always find the idea of "the bijuu died if its jinchuriki died" kinda dumb. I mean if it's true why no one have ever try to eliminate the jinchurikis to get rid of the threat that the bijuus are ? Apart for Gaara and its automatic defense, the others were easy kills when they were young. And that means that no jinchuriki have ever died on a mission or something ? Well that's convenient...
YeagerMeister31 chapter 23 . 9/1/2018
Well this was interesting so it seems everyone is gonna know the Naruto has the Kyubi in him well minus Team 7 but does Sakura know already and I wonder what she'll do when she finds out and I wonder how Naruto will fair against Pein
YeagerMeister31 chapter 22 . 8/30/2018
Well that was interesting so Naruto's leaving on his own a silly plan but when is anything Naruto does not insane
Narusaku chapter 19 . 6/6/2018
no offense but i've got say this ruined the story for me and i won't continue to read. why does this ''pregnancy twist'' happen in every other story? boring.
TheHarshApprentice chapter 16 . 5/15/2018
That's a cool set of exams.
TheHarshApprentice chapter 15 . 5/15/2018
That scene was hot. Wonder if there are more in the story.
Forlane07 chapter 36 . 3/22/2018
Amazing piece of work here! Loved it. Only down side was the amount of usage of the word "whilst" but you fixed that lol. i applaud this work!
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 36 . 7/1/2017
Sooooo good! Considering that you wrote this about ten years ago when there was very little info on Akatsuki, your imagination was quite exceptional :) I loved reading it!
YeagerMeister31 chapter 21 . 6/6/2017
man Deidara is so boring and weak and such a coward I mean a baby could beat him I hope Naruto rips him to pieces as well as Tobi/Obito because there both pathetic jokes anyway
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