Reviews for Eight Million Times
ne71 chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Wow. This was amazing. You did a great job portraying the characters in a situation in which it's difficult to imagine them, and you captured them really well. I especially liked Pam's depiction, it was like she'd become addicted to Jim but couldn't give up her life with Roy.

And Jim's line: "You're so beautiful," said as an accusation, really affected me. It seemed to sum up everything about the situation so perfectly.

I know this is an older story, so I'm very glad I found it. Thanks for writing it. Nice work.
Alex Wert chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Well that was creepy and haunting. Good show.
meg chapter 1 . 9/2/2006


this story is amazing
Shaye chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Whoa. Uh. I keep trying to find the next part - and then I realize there IS no next part. And, I just, this is a powerful story. And I think the part I like the best is Jim's last scene, with Mark, because that really feels like what Jim at the end of his rope would be like. I mean, you broke my heart, but I'm pretty sure that's what you set out to do. *g*