Reviews for Working out the Paradox
Sighcoe chapter 14 . 3/29/2015
Im loving your story, but im confuse as to why wolfram hated Yuuri's world. As far as I know, Wolfram enjoyed his time whenever he was transported. He even insisted to be with them one time, anime wise. Even the light nivel never hinted of Wolfram hating anything on Yuri's world, in fact he's curious and excited like a child. Well, i guess sinc ethis a fanfiction everything could happen.

I dont mind this Kyota guy, but Im not rooting for him either.
Wolfram's attitude with Yuri was weird, its as though the moment the part where he went with Kyota, his personality did a 180 degree change.

I dont mind reading a darker Yuri, I like a bit matured Yuri. i love Wolfram, he's my fave character.. But he gets more and more unlikable as the story progress. Well, im going to read more. I still find the plot interesting.
naz0nna chapter 18 . 4/17/2014
Is there any other ways or places I could read this fic that'll come WITH the deleted R-17 scenes, aside from your Adultfanfiction page? Urggh, the internet connection I'm using blocks porno sites, and surprisingly, yes, Adultfanfic is flagged as porno-contained webpage, by this internet connection I'm using right now.. And your MediaMiner org page doesn't seem to exist any more? (o.0)?

*sighs*Ah, this sucks, I'm only about 3 chapters away in finishing this awesome EPIC KKM! fic of yours here, and this whole situation is just pissin' me off, MAJESTICALLY. And, no, I'm so NOT sorry that this is not a review, but a pathetic excuse for an SOS to the author instead.
Dreamweaver chapter 21 . 8/10/2013
Loved the story! Couldn't stand some of the sad parts, but loved all of the last few chapters (even if I couldn't see the scenes I really wanted too)...shame. Still can't wait for more
Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2013
vrriacho chapter 21 . 4/9/2013
I love this story.
It was awsome!
Guest chapter 21 . 1/28/2013
This was a masterpiece and I love how adult the two characters sound. True, I haven't read the manga and trying to find English copies of the light novels is about as easy as pulling someone's teeth. That aside, the fact that English isn't your first language is impressive. I teach English to learners who are learning it as a second language and I know how difficult this language can be to grasp. And as you've stated before, there are far too many people on this site who speak English as their primary language and do a piss-poor job of it on here. I applaud you.

Now, on to the story. I love it. I decided to read it (on both sites) instead of doing my homework immediately. I will do my homework now, but wanted to drop a line and let you know how wonderful this story was. I can't wait to read the next one since Wolfram is such a great character. I can see this type of situation happening in canon and I am glad a more realistic set of reactions finally came to play. I know that us anime fans love the ridiculous, but at times it's nice to see something realistic come to pass. I know for a fact that many people in Japanese culture love BL/GL, but only in fiction; they don't like to talk about it happening in real life.

Thank you for the entertainment.
Shiauko chapter 5 . 12/4/2012
HAHAHAHA the shrine has become a sluthouse? That's priceless! Still a great story, though I feel bad for Wolfram right now. I also feel bad for Yuuri, it's like no one gets that he's just not attracted to men! (Even in the anime/manga!)

But I would like for Yuuri to turn around and fall for Wolfy!
Shiauko chapter 2 . 12/4/2012
I really like this story so far! And you're right, I've seen some native English speakers who don't seem able to grasp such simple concepts. It infuriates me when people screw up the simplest things. It's "I KNOW", not "I no". And Where vs were. I told my cousin that if she wanted to talk to me she wasn't allowed to text me anymore, she had to call. I mean seriously, one can only take so many rounds of "Were r u?" and "i no, hay" before they want to break their phone.

Ok, back to the story. I guess I sorta understand your not liking Greta, though I personally 'squee*' whenever I see something small and cute, and she was no exception. I don't really like women in the shows I watch, which is why KKM is so perfect for me (and shows like Supernatural). I'm not really threatened by the older women (Like Lady Celi), it's only the ones who could mess up any crack pairings that are in my head I don't seem to like.

Once again, I really lie your story so far, and I can't wait to see how it turns out. You've written the characters well, and your mastery of the English language is top rate! Hats off to you, my friend!

*Squee - verb: To squeal with glee; from a combination of the two words; the sound of an excited fangirl
noun: A feeling of excitement and happiness, such that one feels like squeeing
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Guest chapter 21 . 8/11/2012

it's sweet and light and so fvcking hot, even with out the scene. *ahem* but i did read them on the other sight..._

Sugarly the Slytherin Queen chapter 9 . 6/20/2012
Hey! First of all great job with the fic, I really enjoy it. You're doing a great work describing Yuuri and Wolfram view on the situation. I just got a little confused in the chapter with your OCs they talk about swinging one way or another, well I thought the whole point of Yuuri issue was that he didn't understand that in this world people didn't swing one way or another, they just liked whoever they liked male or female. It was quite weird to read that it would be weird for Yozak to like a girl because it seems like a contradiction. And also I was confused with Kyota, the name is clearly japanese and aside from Yuuri and Murata no one has a japanese name so yeah I thought it was kind of random. Anyway aside from that it's greeeaaat!
ray3arth chapter 9 . 12/27/2011
"I have just fucking annihilated an army for you"

Best line ever. I was simultaneously cackling with glee and getting teary-eyed at Yuuri having to kill people. I'm really enjoying your fic. I've never really taken the time to think about how Yuuri and Wolfram would actually end up in love (I'd prefer to skip straight to the awesome sex ). Also, it doesn't seem like a lot of fanfic writers want to deal with this issue either (I could just not be looking hard enough). I'm excited to keep reading, though I feel like I'm perpetually on pins and needles waiting for some massive misunderstanding or intense tragic moment or something else to further split Yuuri and Wolfram apart. The suspense is killing me. :(

I really want to ask who you're going to have top, but I think I'll just let myself be surprised (I feel like I'm the only one out there who prefers Wolfram topping).

Keep up the great work,

ray3arth :)
Twillk chapter 21 . 12/19/2011
Amazing... seriously. I know this was written a long time ago, but I cant help it- I need to review the awesomeness :P Your writing style is excellent, I know you have a beta reader, but the point is that in the end, the writing is flawless. The plot is amazing as well, I liked the way you managed to show the chemistry between the pair while keeping up an interesting plot and while I don't like Kyota as a person, he is a very interesting and well created, well rounded character. I would love to see Murata and Kyota together xD but then, Im weird like that. I was laughing out loud when Yozak's friend realised that Yuuri was the king, and Wolfram finding that wedding dress was a stroke of genius. I loved it, and am going to find a way to read the uncut version- but I must say, even without the actual 'rated' stuff, this story stands up well by itself. It was a pleasure to read. And I think this is the longest review I've ever given.. but yeah. keep writing!
mr.maz0ku chapter 21 . 12/13/2011
wow, that is a really really good story. i will read the sequel after i sleep. i started reading this 7 in the morning yesterday and now its 9:30am. i cant stop reading. the chapters are long but i like it. its so interesting. :)
Lenaloe chapter 11 . 11/6/2011
"Yeah, that Global Warming might attack us! Is he really powerful?" epic!
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