Reviews for First Encounter
JJ4lifebabey chapter 1 . 1/2
To Lyris Malachi,
We were very disturbed while reading your work. The implications that Hogwarts is a sentient being, even when the students are walking insides during the school year, is deeply unsettling. Although the LGBT content was appreciated, the sentience ruined any joy the representation gives the reader. Students walking through the halls are walking through a sentient being. This is unnerving and gross. Please refrain from writing these works in the future. Despite my better judgement, we're giving this a 10/10, would absolutely read again
bye
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
This is how you know you’ve found the weird part of the internet
what the fuck chapter 1 . 12/3/2020
DEAR GOD NO WHAT THE HELL DID I JUST READ
nooo noo noo noo chapter 1 . 11/13/2020
you thought more about if you could but you never stopped to think if you should.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2020
wtf did i just read?!(oh gods i need BLEACH)
Kaylie chapter 1 . 10/13/2020
I've smoked weed and I don't know what brand you use bro...the maximum I've hallucinated is my boyfriend atop a unicorn...this is crazy...Hogwarts and the squid...active imagination bro
TheCrazedValkyrie chapter 1 . 9/30/2020
WTF IS THIS
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2020
what tf fuck
Squilliam chapter 1 . 9/22/2020
This might be the best story line from any HP Fan Fiction. I was quickly intrigues by this classic opening. I may have read this many times, but it always feels like the first. I may not have been the biggest Harry Potter fan, but this story definitely made me a BIGGER fan. Wow, this will be studied in the Smithsonian on alternative and creative storytelling for generations to come.
Aoi Shinkaze chapter 1 . 9/4/2020
This is a masterpiece of modern literature
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2020
I can never unread this story
Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2020
what kind of fucking weed were you smoking lmao
bro chapter 1 . 8/22/2020
fuck this
soyboy ig chapter 1 . 6/21/2020
big fan of the squid
eli chapter 1 . 6/17/2020
i just got sent this and i have no words. it’s well written tho.
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