|Reviews for Sono Saishuu Konwaza|
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/19/2016
It's actually Tajuu (not Taijyuu) Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (not Jitsu).
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/19/2016
I know that Sarutobi banishing Naruto is essentially the ultimate twist in the story, but I wished you had placed reasons on why the Hokage didn't chose another logical path (ex. putting Naruto in the protection of Anbu/Jounin, revealing him as the son of the Yondaime thus changing his reputation, punishing Haraishe etc.) so that he didn't look stupid.
| Uzumaki spiral chapter 2 . 9/5/2015
good plot you got but i dnt like narusaku pairing so ya but anyway i have a fealing this is gona be a blast
| Richardtylr chapter 7 . 10/13/2014
Lol the jokes on you. I sold my soul for a happy meal when I was six...
| PugTheMagician chapter 23 . 4/11/2014
this story was excellent i'm glad to say. i will admit its starting was a bit slow, partly because of the unusual starting with hiraise, and partly because rather than excitement or romance, it was more setting up. however once you passed the 5 year banishment the story became pure gold. it had its slow parts but it more than made up for it in its highs. i especially liked your charecter futeki and the fact that you made naruto have a defensive style. i liked that you didn't make naruto completely OP, even having him lose on occasion, that really helped his charecter. i really enjoyed your sideline stories, they were very comedic. i especially liked your voyeur chapter, it added some welcome humour to the mix. lastly i really like how you structured naruto and hiraise's fight, i was n the edge of my seat quite alot of the time. only thing i can add is i liked the relationships you had with the rookies, both friendship and pairings, they were masterfully done in my opinion, which is an achievement in my opinion simply because of how many times i have read it done terribly wrong. anyway i just wanna say great story, sorry for gasbagging and i look forward to what you do in the future (provided you are still on here, i forgot to check)
best wishes mate
| PugTheMagician chapter 8 . 4/10/2014
i really enjoyed this little sideline chapter, helped to round out some of the charecters. i especially liked how you made tenten read the icha books and her comment on how it was funny
| fullmetal-meeze chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
Diary of Jane is a great song, yeah! I also like this fic. I'm assuming you didn't know that the Yondaime is Naruto's father (it wasn't released yet, yes?) and this take on the his unknown background is pretty interesting
| m chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
I almost stopped reading at the beginning with the intro this. Also the way you phrased the sentence you used sordid wrong. I can only assume you meant not for those who don't like sordid tongue. Didn't really now how to phrase it myself though cause I don't use words like that.
Also Naruto did call Sakura by name. If they've know each ther since kids of course he would call her Sakura-cchan…
Other than that I haven't really gotten far enough into the story to know if I like it.
| SABER chapter 23 . 6/28/2013
start to finish kick ass!
| Phoenix185 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
ugh to me this is stupid so far you need more background first to do a story like this
| rich chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
dude you would of been better off with the sleep
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/24/2012
why the hell do u write about the virginity part
| Animefangirl95 chapter 13 . 8/8/2012
| Animefangirl95 chapter 12 . 8/8/2012
Stories with multiple pairings fir the same person kinda annoy me... Maybe cause I just prefer couple(as in 2) to remain faithful to each other only
| Animefangirl95 chapter 11 . 8/8/2012
Nice job with the entirety of the chapter