Reviews for Deliverance
BishiHarem chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Boomerang Butterfly chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
Really good! I wanna see next chapter, pleeze!

GuitarChick14 chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
awesome story...i totally loved it and cant wait for more! yay! :)
SakuraNekoChick chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
I like this a lot :) I'm excited about the next chapter to see how to switch up the plot. Another great fic!
That Albino Kid chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
This particular scene could've easily been written cheesy. But, I think you portrayed it wonderfully between Mugen and Fuu without making it too mushy, which really contributed to the tension of the situation. Please continue, you've done a great job so far!
the hxc MollyDolly chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
YAY! good story! i love have a great writing style!



Molly Francis chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
Hahaha! Fiirst review!

Annyyhow. O, pretty begining.

Descriptive and I could picture it in my head, even if I already saw that 25th episode.

Duuddee. I'm jealous of you. I'm way too shy to be writing lemons and stuff. But I'll have to get over it, I might have to be writing one soon. Dammit. Ugh.

Anyway. I still love that fact that even though Mugen came for her, he's all like, "RUN BITCH! GODDAMN!"

Ho, I almost busted out laughing.

Anyways, nice story and favorited/alerted and stuff.

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