Reviews for Wait for me whenever darkness falls
Bar-Ohki chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
Pervy football comments! Nice.
thisacchasbeenabandoned chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Good one! I like it! *thumbs up*

Anyway, its a great story.. and I like the part that Mamori actually, really, did the 'bite' tongue thing.. lol

Make more, okay...? :)
selle18 chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
This is absolutely amazing.

I love how you easily intertwined football terms in their conversation about relationship conditions. It flowed so well, and it was SO like them!

And that last bit about Hiruma's air of purpose visible in his step was genius.

You also wrote Hiruma wonderfully in character while he attempted to start something with Mamori. I personally love the lines, "Next time I'll, like, fucking signal with my eyes or something," and "It's dark and I'm a fucking gentleman."
Willdew chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
I love how he's shooting at animals while he's walking her home. -_- *giggles*
tanyart chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
Adorable. I ilke how they make football references. Too cute.! I'm faving.
Chranze chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Really Cute. I was looking for material like this. I love the couple. Hope you keep on writing!
Os.Hoshi chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
how come i found this fic in the spanish section? O.o; Anyways! It was, umm.. interesting! My fav quote was this:

“What? It’s dark and I’m a fucking gentleman.”

Gentleman, eh? Yeah, right! XD I also liked the part of him shooting at them lil' critters ]
Cuteas aBug chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Now that was interesting! Hiruma making comparisions between dating and football sound very possible. I could practically see that in my head.