Reviews for When I Grow Up
sakuraii chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
This was just the cutest thing! I'm a firm believer that the three of them are meant to be together, and you got that across in a really cute and adorable way. I liked how you kept everyone so in character: Sora being plain goofy, Kairi just joking and going along with it, and Riku being the voice of reason. I was cracking up when Sora said "Me too." Awesome story! :)
Falvern chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
This was interesting to say the least. I don't tend to read the Riku/Sora/Kairi threesome thing (I'm sure there's an official fanfiction term or name for it). Mainly because of the slash aspect that usually entails in their relationship. Though I can tolerate non-graphic slash in stories like this (I usually have to have at least one female in the pairing to consider it). Anyway I'm sure you don't care about my taste in fanfiction.

I think that you did an excellent job on this. I found it to be an interesting, and amusing little one-shot. All three characters were in character as well, which is always a plus. Anyway, thanks for writing this little piece of entertainment. I would love to read a story that actually goes into detail about their presentation to their class. That would be amusing lol.
PfenixB chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Oh, that's adorable...and funny, because two of my female, non-lesbian friends just got "engaged" and gave each other rings. They didn't mention it in a school project, of course, but they've got their entire lives planned out together, complete with cheating spouses, lumpy couch, and head injuries. I'm not sure why they'd include something like a head injury, but who am I to judge?

Anyway, great fic. "Otherwise, my husband is cheating on me with my wife, and that's no good." Beautiful.
lonelyassassin chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
Oh my. That was interesting. Reminds me of my friends.

"Because, you know, otherwise, my husband is cheating on me with my wife, and that's just no good."

Great. *laughs*
Mistress of Muses chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
That gave me beautiful warm fuzzy feelings. I can see Sora wanting to be a housewife. XD The line "Because, you know, otherwise, my husband is cheating on me with my wife, and that's just no good." was just marvelous too.
HikariZaichuYami chapter 1 . 8/22/2008

awe its so cute i just wanna hug it! i love the ending line its so riku-ish. lol :3

A! 5/5 stars
lily23 chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
This story is so funny.

"Fine," Sora says, with a slight pout. "Because, you know, otherwise, my husband is cheating on me with my wife, and that's just no good."

Riku sputters. "Sora!"

"What? Anyway, Kairi, wanna get married to Riku and me?"

"As long as you get the part time job." Kairi says.

"Okay." Sora agrees.

I love that part.
sorceress115 chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
So cute!
llivla chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
My brain just exploded and went to a very special places where everyone loves this OT3 as much as I do. Seriously, I just rewatched the clips again and thought...well, you know. xD Anyway, this was lovely-I can just imagine them growing old and doing like, forms. That's how much I love them. xD

roxette143 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Hahahahha..Good story
Moon Faery chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Okay, I'll be honest. I don't like the Sora/Kairi/Riku menage, regardless of "focal member/couple" or whatever. Just not my cuppa. I don't seem to have a headspace where Kairi works with either or both of them in any sort of reciprocal romantic fashion.

Which is why I'm completely flabbergasted by this story. It fits perfectly with them and creates a space where I can actually SEE it happening. (It helps that this is taking place when all three were separated, and the effects of the events of the games are my major objection to things.) Riku keeping the ring in his pocket was just the right touch, and I loved how Kairi and Sora just went straight over his head. It said a lot about their friendship that they didn't bother to even consult him hypothetically on things.

In general, I found this entirely to my liking, and very in-character. For a hard-core slasher like myself, that's a challenge. Well done, indeed.
The Walker of Dreams chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
This is an absolutely adorable story. I love how matter-of-fact and serious Kairi and Sora are about the whole thing. Plus, the ring thing is so sweet. Also the line "Riku just stares, and wonders how he has managed to find such horrible, insane, stupid, and amazingly wonderful friends." is probably the best line I've read in a KH fan fiction in a long time.
xoVanilla-Bean chapter 1 . 8/21/2007

I just adore their friendship. :D And this gave me the giggles! So sweet.

Haha, so childish and fun. :] And the ending line was great. :3

reversedhymnal chapter 1 . 7/24/2007

Rock on, babe!
UnIQuE Not Weird chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Aw! That was so cute! I normally don't like the Sora x Kairi x Riku pairing either, but I this fic was awesome!
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