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Guest chapter 5 . 12/26/2016
I say this lovingly and from the perspective of constructive criticism and hope you see it as such. Please give yourself more respect as a writer and proof read your work. The grammar mistakes distract from the plot and it's really a disservice to your story. I tried really hard to ignore all the mistakes but I simply can't read it anymore...
BlackMagicRose7 chapter 23 . 4/19/2016
I loved this story, I'm glad I got to reread it. I just wish you would fix the minor mistakes in the story.
Undertheskys chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
Good story. Wish there was more to the ending
Undertheskys chapter 23 . 2/23/2016
Honestly Naraku is a great brother, when they found out Kagome was having triplets, he called his assistant to doulbe everything Kagome already has so that Kagome doesnt have to worry about it
Undertheskys chapter 23 . 2/23/2016
Ohh Sesshomaru fainted right when he said triplets
Undertheskys chapter 17 . 2/22/2016
I feel that Rin and Kohaku are stupid honestly, like they run away to be together just because their parents and brothers wont agree cause their too young is logical. I mean they dont have to marry and stuff right now, they can take their time get to know each other and their familys more and wait for the approval or the "okay". PLUS if they know Rins family is like that then why bother running away, its just going to create more problems for others. I know their 18 meaning their adults but to run away to be together cause family doesnt like them doing stuff cause their think their still pretty young is stupid.
Undertheskys chapter 17 . 2/22/2016
WHAT THE HELL!? Can you not remember what name you used for Naraku's father? Cuz it was Mikan first then you changed it to Muso last chapter and now its back to Mikan! You need to be consistent with the names and remember which names you used or some readers may get confused thinking you added a new character or something.
Undertheskys chapter 16 . 2/22/2016
Wasnt Naraku's dad name Mikan not Muso? Why'd did you change it?
Undertheskys chapter 16 . 2/22/2016
Hahaha Sesshomaru called Mia and Kagome, what a guy
Undertheskys chapter 13 . 2/22/2016
Yay shes pregnant
Undertheskys chapter 11 . 2/22/2016
HAHAHAH Naraku walked in on them. Sesshomaru is such a tease
Undertheskys chapter 6 . 2/22/2016
Ohh they confessed
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 13 . 7/12/2015
Hahahah poor Naraku! And wow, Mikan sure has some nerve to lecture Kagome about dating a dog demon when he's married to a miko.
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 5 . 7/12/2015
That's not fair on how they forbid Rin to see Kohaku. Rin is an adult therefore she can have sex if she wants too. And ew... Kikyo. Haha
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
Why doesn't he just tell her how he feels? That would solve everything. And I agree, Sesshomaru is one hot piece of ass. Wish that kind of guy existed lol
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