Reviews for Forbidden
Jynxie-Kun chapter 4 . 5/7/2016
Naru-sama chapter 4 . 2/3/2013
I enjoyed this actually so don't say it's bad! keep up the good work I'll be waiting for the next! ;p

your fan Naru-sama!
Tropicall chapter 4 . 4/27/2010
I like this story a lot, but you should correct it a bit. If you want I could do it for you since this story is really good! you captured the characters really well.
Some Girl101 chapter 4 . 1/23/2007
W00t w00t! I love yaoi!

Great fic~ XD
AClosedAccount1098 chapter 4 . 1/19/2007
VTM: XD Yay! Update! Awesome chapter! I love how Ace was like: "well, I dont wanna see you smoking, luffy." X3 Great work! Please update again soon! XD Rock on!
Savage Valentine chapter 4 . 1/19/2007
AWESOMENESS! I really like this. it's interesting. I can't really put my finger on why I like it, but there's something about it that has me sucked in.
loupy-mad-rocker chapter 3 . 1/18/2007

this is so sweet

plesplesplesplesplesples continue ples
Neko42 chapter 3 . 1/15/2007
UPDATE! it's such a lovely fic!
Neko42 chapter 2 . 1/15/2007
AW! that's so cute!
Savage Valentine chapter 3 . 1/13/2007
strangfe, but cool! *thumbs still up* this is a very rare but in my opinion a very caring couple. I lahhve it
Rock Gecko chapter 3 . 1/10/2007
so sweet! love it! update again on it soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/9/2007
that was neat! I really like where you're going with this. keep it up, please!
AClosedAccount1098 chapter 3 . 1/9/2007
VTM: Wow, awesome chapter! The emotion it it was great! XD Keep up the awesome work!
AClosedAccount1098 chapter 2 . 1/6/2007
VTM: XD Sweet! You portray Ace and Luffy in such a cool way! And I love chapter two! X3 So cute! You've some pretty mean writing skills! XD I hope to see more! Rock on! Ciao!
Savage Valentine chapter 2 . 1/5/2007
Neat! so cute! *thumbs up*
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