AH! I LOVE THIS! The plot line is totally amazing! It desprately needs an update!

erm-How long has it been since you updated anyway? (It's been ages!)

this fic is amazing so far! im really looking forward to when you update (and im hoping soon from looking at when it was last updated P* but yeah. this is a really good fic and i can't wait to see what happens! D I literally just started reading this today and i cant wait for more so please update soon! _

Actually, this chapter made me laugh the hardest. Poor Cloudster... Yay for Demyx and Roxas and Tidus and Sora and the others cause, man, I was wondering if they'd ever show up.

Yah, so, it's my first time reviewing, and I could go chapter by chapter but that would take far too long and I don't want to bore you to tears with my rambling. So, I'll keep it short.

I *love* it! I stayed up all night long reading then got up the next morning (read: three hours later) and read more. I'm kinda weird like that... oh well. Couldn't sleep anyway.

Can't wait for the next chapter! And to see what happens to little Squally Wally Pumpkin Pie.

I just want you to know that I reread this story about a million times because it's so fantastic. When I think of Cloud, I often think of him in this story. Everyone's characterizations are so great. Little Squall is adorable. Love the backstory. Cloud's mother is so wonderful.

I am very sad about your hiatus because I will not be getting updates for this wonderful story, but I understand that things happen. I will continue to reread in your absence.

Update!

I can't wait! When is the next chapter update?

I'm really enjoying this story. When I came across it, it was a read in one sitting kinda story for me. Sorry to only review the last chapter. It was amazingly easy to fall into this story, as well as the characters. Keep up the amazing writing!

_ i like this story a lot... like, a lot a lot!

most excellent, i can't wait to see what happens next... ending it on a cliffhanger... so evil! eh... update soon, eh? please?

i love this story! it's so sweet and i think the changes happening in squall/leon are so realistic. lol, i loved the porn bit and how embarassed Clud got over it _

Haha, this is so awesome. I just sat here and read all 8 chapters. At once. It's *that good*. Ickle Squall is the most adorable mental image I've ever had. :D

God, I love this story. You gotta update this soon. I hope you had fun in Kenya! I want to go there, always have. Not enough time with college though.

Hope you update soon! It's always an interesting story!

Wow, this fic is AWESOME! At first, I was immediately turned off when I found out that Leon had de-aged, but I forced myself to read it and glad that I did. This idea is new and fresh. I love your character development and the underlying theme of sadness and loneliness. I also love your writing style. I couldn't even tell that English wasn't your first language; your writing is better than most American writers, despite VERY few misspellings. Well anyways, keep updating! I'm dying to find out what happens!

Awesome awesome AWESOME. I want, no, NEED an update.

I adore this story, it's going on alert /and/ fav, and I'll check it every day and even re-read it. *nod* Leon's just so CUTE and all flustered. And then there's whatever Demyx is planning for Cloud. In fact, it's not even Demyx, I want to know who it is. MORE. More I tell you, or I shall be forced to gauge out your liver with a dull grapefruit spoon. I ain't kidding. :D

PLEASE update soon! .O

PS: Your story is so good it wins a SILVER CYBER COOKIE AWARD. If you update and do a really snazzy ending, your award could increase! Added incentive. :P

This story is awesome! It is one of the best Leon/Cloud fics that I have ever read! Hurry and update! I will be anxiously waiting!