Oh my gosh this was so good! Please, continuation soon yes? I really want to know about what was happening in the end! Why was Cloud so pale and sickly when he was about to quit the team too? I'm so excited! So, again, continuation yes?

O.O

So good, loved the length! It made me so happy. Awesome as always, and I can't wait for the next chapter

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Aww ... Cloud's getting jealous...

I can just imagine the troubles that'll come up when Squall returns to Leon \ More troubles than one too... XD

I hope you update soon! ) Have fun in Kenya? XD

oh my gosh!

*cries and cries and cries and...*

dem-dem, bad boy!

and so sad for cloud!

i'm going to cry!

poor leon/squall!

T_T so sad, are you going to cheer me up next chapter? i can't take anymore of this sad and depressing thoughts i get from this story

but it is a VERY good story

We if your leaving in 10 hours then I hope you get this before you leave..._ the chapter wasn't boring in the least bit... Though in all honesty you had me scared there for a bit. I was afraid that something was going to happen to Cloud! oh well at least no physical damage was done. I feel bad for Cloud though, I understand where he's coming from... he worked his ass off just to get the boy's affections, and in the end everyone seems to be warming him up to them with ease. When will he learn patients wil pay off in the end? Squall will have a few new friends and Cloud will have a well deserved boyfriend. P Please update whenever you have time! This chapter ending is gonna depress me (not really just make me ten times as hyper waiting for the next chapter _~)Have fun where ever it is your going, and good luck with your next chapter! Ja ne

Poor Cloud! That was a really good chapter! Even though I'll hve to read it again cos my mind zoned out every once in a while and I wasnt paying full attention. . .well I was for the end bit. . .and most of the middle bit n_n! I look forward to the next chapter(please let it be soon!)

I love this chapter! just like all the other ones!

I'm curently not feeling well...doctors trying to fnd out what the hell is wrong..and this was really something helping me to cheer up! _

I just hope you will upload a new chapter soon!

leaving to kenya? Hope you have/had fun _

and poor cloud... he feels scared T_T... *wants to huggle him*

dem-dem...dum-dum...WHAHAHAHAH...XD

great...just GREAT!

*glomps* Love ya and your writtings!

Neko-chan

arg! why'd it end there!

grr.

So amazing. I love this to pieces. It totally made my day today (even though everything went shit after. I'm sure chapter 7's awesome aswell but it has a swear word so my schools blocked it. :( Next weekend for me!

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Gwaah! This fic is so cute! Its adorable! The storyline is fantastic! Though I'm wondering what would happen if Cloud found out Squall was Leon. . .

i must say i have acually never read more than 3 chapters of a story here, this is the first time Im really looking forward to the next chapter great job!

i like your fic ,the idea,how leon is cute and being child but u dont put so much conversation between the characters, ur fic full of describtion! i get easily bored and skip that part!cant u put some event and conversation?

Please, please update! I love this story. I love how you write the characters, they aren't OOC. (Well Squall kind of is but he's a kid now so...)I love reading every dramtic little moment you come up with so please write more!

I love this story! It's so...so heartbreakingly sweet and sad at the same time and oh it's so pretty and addictive and gah I'm incoherent and rambly now. But oh, what a story! I love it so, so SO much. It makes me so happy because it's so sweet but then you turn around and make me so sad that I want to cry. TT So beautiful and pretty and it just makes my heart ache. Please update soon! In the mean time, I'll go back and re-read this story and laugh (and cry) like a lunatic.