|Reviews for Where My Heart Is|
| xblackwingedangelx chapter 4 . 8/1/2011
I love it ! I dont really like reyne much and think that sai deserves someone else . Anyway , please update ASAP .
| TenshiXXX chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
loving the story so far! I especially love the way Kiba's being so jittery. One question though: who's seme in each pairing?
| cek chapter 4 . 2/6/2008
i need to read chapter 5! it has DEFINATELY been longer than the two weeks you promised to post in! *pout* i mean you updated in SEPTEMBER! i really like this story, so please HURRY! *pout*
| cek chapter 4 . 1/18/2008
I'm really glad your continueing WHERE MY HEART IS...i think its really good(alot better than i could write) and it sounds like your going to make it evan better(n_n)...I'm glad i found it.
| Eru chapter 2 . 10/10/2007
Not really my type of fic, so I only read the first two chapters. But I'd like to give some concrit, because I think this fic has potential but right now, you aren't making the most of it.
1. It's a penis. Cock. Dick. Not a vague 'thing'. It makes you, as the author(ess), seem very childish and immature if you write a fanfiction with sex, graphic or implied, and are unable to name the genitalia correctly. If you're uncomfortable with it, then you shouldn't write anything x-rated. As simple as that.
2. It's staring or stared. Not starring or starred. You don't have many spelling mistakes, but that one really stood out. I advice you to edit it since you misspelled it not just once.
3. The characterizations are more or less off. However, I don't want to critique the way you perceive the characters, since I think that's completely personal, but there are some profound characteristics such as: Kiba doesn't mumble. Have you ever seen him flustered or embarrassed in the series? I sure haven't. Have you ever seen Naruto be so submissive to Sasuke? Sure, they haven't fucked in the series, but think about his competetive nature. Neither of them, especially at 16, would give away their control just like that.
Like I said, this is constructive critisism. I hope you didn't get offended, because that certainly wasn't my intention. And, even though this isn't exactly my kind of fic, have fun writing it till the end.
| BOE-4eva chapter 4 . 6/24/2007
Aww are you going to update?
I LUV this fic!
| yaoilover93 chapter 4 . 5/28/2007
i love this story please update soon
| Bloodhill chapter 4 . 5/28/2007
I love this and hope you decide to continue sometime in the near future. _
| KitaroJeevas chapter 4 . 5/10/2007
love it! you are a complete and total genius!
| mandarin'peel chapter 4 . 4/29/2007
omg haha, this story made me crack up so many times XD
its so cutee how much shino loves kiba.
who were the teachers talking about ...o.O
i can't wait to see what happens .
| Saint Swordfish chapter 4 . 4/16/2007
Ok, this is good and by good you must keep writing it! And damn that science project! :P
| SaruKaze chapter 4 . 4/8/2007
this story is hella funnie I can't wait until you make another one
| ni-you-wo-de-xin chapter 4 . 3/19/2007
Well, can't wait for the update!
| Scapegrace chapter 4 . 3/4/2007
Well if by 2 weeks you meant 7 months... ok...
I WANT AN UPDATE!
This is really good.
I hate it when I start reading a really good story and its abbandoned.
| flordesombra chapter 4 . 3/2/2007
hello, I'm a spanish yaoifangirl. I like your fic a lot. I would like to read some Shika/Tema action, if you don't mind. I really love this couple. Shika rocks!
well, still writing, please. Monica.