Great story, you had all the elements; technical, a true-to-the-series plot and romance. More Sheyla, even though it would not be true to the series.

This whole series is incredible. I love the concept and John/Teyla interactions.

I had missed this story entirely, because I usually don't spend a lot of time at until I was checking out the nominees for the Isis Awards. I loved it! You wrote a great adventure that kept me hooked the whole time, and you threw in some J/T as well. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your fic.

A truely wonderful story! You have the best writing, and I can't wait to read everything else that you have written.

Seeing the sequel to this reminded me I had never finished this.

Fine scary story! Your OCs are rich but disturbing.

Have they damaged the shield too much?

A rich feeding ground for the wraith for sure if that shield fails.

gripping, with SHELYA, what more could you ask for?

This is just brilliant.

Okay. This is fabulous. Really, really fabulous. Good writing, good romance, my favorite :)

That was an astounding story. It was so well written and had a great plot. I hope to read more of your stuff in the future.

That was awesome. Beautifully written. Bravo. Thanks for sharing.

Holy shit. This story was amazing. You are in a caliber of your own my friend. Just...wow. No words. Simply no words. And I apologize in advance if my following statement seems crude or unfeeling or just plain whack but...from what I can determine by your username, you're a guy! Who writes fanfiction! Who writes freakin' amazing fanfiction! The details, the characterization, you had everyone down to the minutia. I thought the realization Sheppard has that he is considered their version of an intergalactic terrorist particularly poignant. "You are John Sheppard." Like that explains everything. I also liked the visual image of the mob, complete silence except for glimpses of teeth, tongues, lips, gnashing in fury. I imagine that experience to be more terrifying in complete silence than if one could actually hear them.

I loved so many things about this story. Bravo.

Very interesting story great job.