Reviews for Birds of Prey
SkylerOcon chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Hey, nice start. I hope to see any update soon, despite you said they may be slow. I like the fic so far, just try to put in a little more description.

I look forward to your next update!
Axemblack97 chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
This isn't bad. It could be longer though. Please update soon. 7/10
La Salette Prophecy chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Hmm...

Dialogue really is your strong spot. The outside plot seems to be character driven, and the entire voice and quality of the story transforms it into an anime in my head. I can see some influences on you and your writing through this chapter; very interesting.

The chapters are short, really, but to tell you the truth, your audience will broaden if you give them shorter chapters. Most people have the attention span of a rodent, so anything 10,0 words and above scares them away fast.
Connor4536 chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
If this is not updated soon, it will be mediocre. As it is now, that was not a good plot twist with Blood Falcon.