|Reviews for Less Than 1000|
| Thomas Linquist chapter 21 . 6/3/2011
Now that was... odd. I think Ron made sure he and Kim would be together forever, but gets to have a little fun with Shego at the same time. How long til Kim gets control of her mind again?
| Reader101w chapter 20 . 5/3/2011
Hehe, funny little story,
But now for the big question, does Kim still want to kiss Ron to get her Ronshine? Or will it be half a hour worth of brushing and gargling mouthwash for Ron first?
keep up the very good writing that you do,
| Thomas Linquist chapter 20 . 4/30/2011
I just knew that Naco breath had potential. I'm a little surprised the series writers never explored this avenue for comic relief.
| Mr. Wizard chapter 20 . 4/30/2011
Very funny. Perfect little set up, and I was wondering what diretion you were headed with it. I'll leave it for others to determine her look, I'll just enjoy the tale.
| Sentinel103 chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
And it can happen about that fast, but you have to wonder why Anne didn't have James go in for checkups. Now I can see a stroke because they can happen so fast though. And I had one and I'm not 60 yet...it does make a believer out of ya.
Larry (Sentinel 103)
| Katsumara chapter 20 . 4/30/2011
Hahahaha. Oh lord. THat's great! Yeah.. that could definitely replace Wade's knockout gas.
| Rye-bread chapter 20 . 4/30/2011
Yes, ‘em. We like.
The fainting scene in the ‘Roachie’ episode comes to mind. Or perhaps Pepe Le Pew.
Some dudes would sell their soul to make a gal swoon…for nefarious purposes. But our Ron’s too classy for that, one, he won’t take advantage of Kim, and two, he won’t make her suffer more than he has to. Wade’s mom might say, “Child, that’s nothing! Why, my Lontaine can clear a room when he takes his shoes off. For controlling an unruly crowd, it’s better than tear gas.”
There’s also the occasion from ‘Ron Millionaire’ where he’s contemplating his order; “One must also consider the explosive effects of a beanie chimarito.”
And Kim responds with alarm; “Please! For my nose's sake!”
…Am I getting carried away? :D I just should write my own drabble.
| AmericanGecko chapter 20 . 4/30/2011
Brilliant little humor element. I especially love the build-up, and how you used Kim's own personality against her.
Keep up the good work. :)
| BearSent176 chapter 20 . 4/30/2011
At least something good came of that little event... LOL!
Still I hope Kim got her Ronshine after all.
| kim's 1 fan chapter 20 . 4/30/2011
Only Ron, only Ron.
Very funny my friend, looks like Kim finally got her down time, even if it was involuntarily.
I loved it bud, keep up all the great work.
God Bless, Larry
| kim's 1 fan chapter 19 . 4/23/2011
You certainly had me going there.
I actually thought Ron was in love with someone other then Kim, only to discover it's their baby.
Nice job, great surprise ending.
God Bless you my friend,
| Muzzlehatch chapter 2 . 4/23/2011
Scared me there for a minute...
| Mr. Wizard chapter 19 . 4/23/2011
Short, but very sweet.
| AmericanGecko chapter 19 . 4/23/2011
At first I was worried about this story, but it actually turned out very sweet. :)
| Reader101w chapter 19 . 4/23/2011
Nice short story,
I have to say that the idea of misleading was pretty good, but I have the feeling that you overdid it a bit.
The transition from dread to happiness was very rapid and I couldn't really place the dread part. Was Kim jealous about her daughter taking Ron's love from her?
Ron's side was pretty good and believable. But KIm's… I don't know, it just doesn't feel right.
Now I feel bad for ending the review in a negative tone, because the story itself was really good, you managed to put an great combination of apprehension, humor and romance in a story that short.
Keep up the very good writing that you do,