Reviews for The Pride of Suna
falsepermanence chapter 12 . 10h
the idea for this was really good but the execution was just a little too sloppy, like you said, for me to really get into it. too much as happening for me to really understand or be interested in it
Man285 chapter 12 . 9/19
Guest chapter 4 . 7/15
The fan is about half a ton
draculyn28 chapter 12 . 6/9
Very good chapter, i love this story. i hope that someday the continues, greetings.
benjamin chapter 12 . 4/12
este fanfic esta increible buen trabajo y continualo seria una lastima que quedara inconcluso.
kidomaru uzumaki chapter 9 . 7/17/2017
if you don't know yet the leader of Ame at that time was Hanzo but later on was killed by pein becoming the new leader as for kusa i don't really know
Guest chapter 12 . 4/20/2017
So I guess this chapter really did make you give up on the story, oh well. It was fun.
Ghest chapter 7 . 9/17/2016
a traveling Ramen Vendor? or a traveling Kamen Rider, I'd be sure to remember that...
Ghest chapter 4 . 9/17/2016
kaze-hokage, or if you decided to be clever about the translation: hot air shadow.
Ghest chapter 3 . 9/17/2016
and then Temari looks it up, and discovers Kankuro's paint really means that. Which also explains why he changes the pattern later on.
AoMythology chapter 12 . 8/22/2016
You made something similar to Dan's jutsu and Madara's Limbo with Masamuri's bloodline - five years before Kishimoto!

As for gold, it's Gaara's main weakness, as we now know.
misuky7 chapter 12 . 7/9/2016
This is an interesting story, I am excited to read more. :3
Super Saiyan Rose chapter 12 . 7/5/2016
Bro you have got to revive this... This fic has the potential to become one of the best naruto fics on the site, it just needs more story. I am so in love with it, and you have made Naruto fit into the Suna squad like a piece of the puzzle. Please pick it back up? It would be a very youthful thing to do!
Dr.Swagger chapter 12 . 6/10/2016
Aw man this is your best story and you left it what a shame. All the good naruto fanfics stop to soon and the bads ones multiply. Now it's back to the realm of crappy harems rushed op narutos and OCs with bashing and high school aus. You sir will be missed by many it was good while it lasted and you deserve a pat on the back hope you continue cause this is outstanding.

Damien Grimm chapter 10 . 4/3/2016
Lee's nickname is bushy brow, and I like this story.
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