|Reviews for The Captain and the Klutz|
| Clementine Buttersnaps chapter 3 . 4/10/2014
The grammar is is hard to follow sometimes, especially when you change it from first to third person perspective in the same sentence. Also at the beginning it is heavily implied that they are just meeting for the first time, but the way they speak about each other makes it sound like they've known each other longer. I'll keep reading.
| Pointless.Love chapter 2 . 10/24/2010
I like this Derek! So sweet 3
| anonymous chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
its a good story so far, but i wont continue reading it because i dont like that theyre not step siblings. its not as romantic
| CheecaRose chapter 8 . 5/24/2008
Hey hey I know its been a long time since you wrote this story but I would like to say It was SWEET... I have not seen this done yet on here and well i LOVE IT.. Amazing job.
| princetongirl chapter 8 . 8/26/2007
loved it update soon
| SiCk.TiReD.dOnE chapter 8 . 7/9/2007
i really enjoyed reading it!
| Just A Girl Of The Hollow x3 chapter 8 . 5/8/2007
YOU NEED A BETA! Your grammar and puncuation sucked. It made it REALLY hard to read.
| Anabelle Moreau chapter 8 . 3/4/2007
awesome chapter im glad you continued.
| Ghostwriter chapter 8 . 3/3/2007
Cool. Catch ya on the flip side.
| iwantitunique chapter 7 . 12/2/2006
ZOMG whats going to happen in the next chapter update soon plz
| RAWR-IKICKBUTT chapter 7 . 11/25/2006
please please please post the last chapter up son.
I LA-LA-LOVE IT!
| Anabelle Moreau chapter 7 . 10/20/2006
hey good story please cts (continue the story) soon.
btw thanks for taking my story.
| iluvacting chapter 7 . 10/16/2006
PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE-PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This is my absolute favorite story!
| AnimeGirlDirEnGrey chapter 7 . 10/6/2006
please continue as soon as possible!
...i luv this show so much
| x0xUndiscoveredx chapter 7 . 9/30/2006
OMG great update! Now you have to update again and tell me what happens! lol