Wow. Just. Wow.

That was absolutely gorgeous. I've been craving a good Jackie story lately, and this is the best I've found by far.

Awesome! *sniff sniff*

I seem to have a knack at finding fics that make me depressed. This was beautiful, well done.

This was very in character for Jackie. Thanks for sharing. I've always like Jackie and thought Doomsday was her best. Looking at this from a mother's perspective was interesting. It brought tears to my eyes.

"She ran to me on that beach, her mother, wanting me to kiss it better like I used to when she fell over."

That line's so nicely Jackie-good to see someone else appreciates her too. She's stronger than people give her credit for, and I think you showed that well.

This is very in character and very good. You brought a tear to my eye! I like Jackie fics, she was a great character.

Aww thats really sweet! Its so well written, and you can so here Jackie saying that! Its really different aswell, cos i havnt read any Kacie POV stories. This is really awesome! I love it!

Jackie has always been so strong; you've written her so well.

Lovely! Very well-written and very in-character, and so true too. Nice idea and pulled off magnificently. Well done! :D