|Reviews for Lifeless Lifeline|
| smartcheer917 chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
the other version is better
| COUGARS SHADES chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Oh, that's so sweet! Liked this first chapter. The voices sounded right. Keep up the good work. Tah, till next time.
| Alecto's Muse chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
I liked this a lot. Mostly, I like that there's a lot of little details that are just so true to the characters. Toph being obnoxious is a given, but "kicking at the ground, concern replaced with boredom" is something I could totally envision her doing. When Zuko shouts “I don’t even take after him!” Its just so typical of him to have that outburst I can hardly stand it.
I think you could have played up the "thing" between Katara and Zuko a bit more; a few more hints, and glances here and there. The kiss feels a bit sudden, but I'm not complaining. I don't even really need a plot; I'm happy as long as there's a hint of romance :)
| storm-of-insanity chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
I prefer this version :D
I love how you've kept Iroh and Zuko in character. Iroh trying to keep things calm whilst dying was so typical :D
| kidscanfly chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Aw, how sweet! I loved this story. Please write more oneshots as sweet as these. *makes puppy dog eyes*