Reviews for Our Little Miracles
Ending-Daley chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
Hikari-Kayko chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
aww! that was beautiful. lol. bones yelling at him was

csimesser1 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
that was great loved it
motheroftwo chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
A cute story, but the inaccuracies of her labor and birth were distracting. I wasn't expecting a documentary, but in real life, contractions five minutes apart usually mean hours left to go. With my first, my contractions were three minutes apart for over 24 hours, and only got me 3cm dialated. First births are slow like that. Also, in a hospitel setting, it almost always takes two pushes to give birth because after the head is out, the doctors invariably tell you to stop pushing while they suction the baby's airway. I'm not trying to over-correct you because I enjoyed your story, but I thought you might like to know how things really work. Having correct details in a story helps readers focus on the heart of the story and opens up possibilities for dramatic moments and plot twists. Keep writing! :)
TVHollywoodDiva chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
Christa Morgan chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
AWESOME! Good job.
gin chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
you spelled Nicole wrong
ilovebuttfacemiscreants chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
Writerbitch92 chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
aww that is cute i like it

ShiroMiller chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
That was the greatest stroy that i have ever read! Keep up the good work.
emma134 chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
that was really god hope you write more stories
bullet-to-my-heart-x chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
aaw i love ur story and i love bones too great story

thx lol ba happa

mikesh chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
Very cute and good.
red lighting chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
love it are going to update your other bones story Promises
gloomy forensic scientist chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
this is a really sweet fiction...:)
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