Reviews for Wielders of the Shadow Omnitrix
cheire chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
"which is like earth, but was almost completely different."

how can something be like something yet almost completely diffrence.

i've asked other people i know this question and i'm not the only one confused by that.
ArmoredSoul chapter 3 . 5/18/2007

That last spoiler about XLR8 sounded painful!

I hope you update soon!

This is an AWESOME story!

But please, no more cliffies!

ArmoredSoul chapter 2 . 5/16/2007
Why didn't you change the REAL aliens from the Omnitrixs' names? It would probably make story telling much easier, instead of having to go 'Ben as FourArms' or 'the girls' XLR8'. A liitl eless confusing...

Hey! I have some ideas for names!

Check these out!

XLR8- Flash (after Flash the DC super hero SPEEDY!)

Grey Matter- Brainiac (big NO DUH!)

FourArms- Tiny (*snigger*)

HeatBlast- Pyro (firepyro, latin i think)

RipJaws- Atlanta (Atlantis, the city lost under the ocean)

DiamondHead- Gemm (kinda obvious)

Stinkfly- Flit (flit and flutter! wings)

Upgrade- Tech (cause he's technological)

Cannonbolt- Kanon (just a play on words)

Wildmutt- Fang (dog. duh)

Wildvine- Spike (spiney man!)

Ghostfreak- Seraphina (don't ask...)
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 5/16/2007


I'm confused...
grandHyperbole chapter 2 . 8/21/2006
DX NO FAIR THEY CHEATED!they had the sonic wave thingy!*mutters under breath for a second*awesome torture me with the second spoiler DX
this is good chapter 2 . 8/20/2006
this is a really good story i hope u update soon!
Fix-It Alchemist chapter 2 . 8/19/2006
To the kitchen!


Me: Ed goings to tell us how he beat up the Taisa. I luved the story please write some for Aliens they seem so thats a bad just thats whats makes them less human.
grandHyperbole chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Sounds good for your first Ben 10 't wait to read more,hope you update soon.i can't imagine normal parents letting their 12yr old daughters do something like climb a mountain by themselves,so i guess my mom isn't normal as she'd probably let me_ anyways,be watcin' for the e-mail;
Fix-It Alchemist chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Sweet I get the first review i luv the story are the Kantorians seem so human.I luved it write more.