Reviews for A New Life in San Francisco
Matt chapter 21 . 11/22/2019
Why do you insist on spelling Coop with a U in it? The name is Coop, not Coup. A coup is something completely different, as Monty Python would tell you. Look it up online - all the information on the Charmed characters is readily available.
Matt chapter 20 . 11/22/2019
Their children would gain nothing from Hogwarts. The children of the Halliwell sisters go to normal school and learn normal subjects, none of which are taught at Hogwarts. All the classes which are taught at Hogwarts are for wizards, and none of the Halliwell family are wizards. So they won't learn anything useful from classes at Hogwarts. And since Muggle Studies at Hogwarts is known to be about 100 years behind the times, the Muggle Studies professor isn't likely to be much help either.
Matt chapter 19 . 11/22/2019
What is wrong with you? England is eight hours ahead of California, not behind. At seven a.m. on November 1 in California it's three p.m. in the afternoon on the same day in England. Get a clue.
Matt chapter 6 . 11/22/2019
Okay, some examples. They don't have flats in the U.S., they have apartments. They don't have centres, they have centers. Anything that ends in an r and an e has the e first, then the r. The only place that has a warden is a prison. An orphanage would have a Director or Administrator. Offices don't have stalls, they have cubicles.
Matt chapter 6 . 11/22/2019
You do know the Charmed Ones and their families are American and live in San Francisco, California, right? Yet your writing has them speaking like people from the U.K. You have them using many words and phrases which are not used by Americans. So you're making no attempt to make the dialogue in this story at all authentic. Obviously you're from the U.K., but that shouldn't matter.
WyteWolf91 chapter 27 . 5/14/2019
Ok so this was the first crossover that I read with the charmed ones and Harry Potter. AND I LOVED IT. it was a bit odd, a little confusing then it was a bit of a tear jerker and a bundle of laughs in between lol Thanks for an awesome story.
Melikalilly chapter 27 . 2/8/2019
I love this story
TeZuKa j chapter 27 . 12/31/2018
Très sympa.
kirby19 chapter 27 . 12/31/2018
This story was amazing! It was original, the writing was fantastic, and the length was perfect! I loved every bit of it, well done!
Raven AzuNoctuli chapter 27 . 10/28/2018
Third time reading. So cool. Thank you so much !
Wolvie26 chapter 27 . 9/13/2018
Love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
Wow. Cheesy as fuck
suziq968 chapter 27 . 4/25/2018
This was great, but there is a part of me that wants the elders to all orb into the wizamagot and tell them and Dumbledore off and make sure the press is there to print the truth and force them to give Harry back what they can of what they stole out of Dumbles and the ministry's pockets. It's just so messed up that they are getting away with what they did to him. They should have to pay and not be rewarded.
Therio chapter 26 . 2/20/2018
I had read and reviewed this story before (in 2010) and decided to re-read it. It is a really good story that stands the test of time, and with your descriptions, one does not even need to know about Charmed or Harry Potter to follow along with the story.
jazmin-ichigo chapter 27 . 2/5/2018
Fue realmente genial, me encanto n.n
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