|Reviews for Our Dance|
| M2J MandalorianJedi chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
It is quite good. In my opinion, totally in character for Ramza. Im the game it was about then that he had his doubts about who and what he was fighting for and not long after that his resolve strengthened and he became the knight his father wanted him to be. I liked it, very much so.
| dreamlifter chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Greatly enjoyed this oneshot as i recently just started playing Final Fantasy Tactics.
Not knowing how the game worked, i kept trying to pheonix down meluda (and delita's sister later on) or tried playing the mission not even hitting her. But it had to happen. I think FF Tactics is an amazing game in a large part because of Miluda's character was so poignant. Her dialogue was pretty devastating. It left an impression. Made me want to really see what this game had in store
As always, your writting was excellant. I just don't think enough people know these 2 characters well enough to appreciate this.
| Some Random Reviewer chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Now that's what I'm talking about. This is a unique pairing, and I love it to death. Ramza's admiration of Miluda was so perfect, and the way he's commanding his troops the same way is such a nice touch. The way she uses no elixers, but he needs every one he can get. She's superior to him, and he's got the upper ground to counter. But if they were to fight on even ground, who would win? Ramza's developed, but Miluda does seem to be the incarnation of Shiva in this story.
It's an utter shame you're not continuing this. I'd love for Miluda to return Ramza's feelings, or at least respect. I can see them fighting in the afterlife, the landscape in the image of where Miluda fell. Would she fall again? Would it be a draw? I can't decide. I suppose that's why you won't continue it. It would diminish the first chapter. And I can be content with the first chapter. Thanks for the good read.
| Spiritblade chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
I like the way you wrote this. The concept of our rivals making us who we are is a truth that cannot be denied.
| Vasuki chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
A neat little story, I'm a tactics fanatic myself, and I was suprised to see this because I had just started to replay it a few days earlier xD. Every time I fought Miluda I thought "damn, wish I could use invite on her..." She was just that kind of character. What would you call the group of soldiers under Ramza's command? They're too small to be an army...a squad? Platoon? Posse?
| TheDisruptiveOne chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
This is a surprising entry. And I admit that I am surprised to see you write a fan fiction about it. I wouldn't have read it had I not added you to my author alert list. It's been a long time since I played Final Fantasy Tactics. I remember something about the story I didn't like was that I did all the work (as Ramza) and Delita stole all the credit for himself and became King.
This was well written though and it makes me feel the urge to play some of my old tactics games. Tactics Ogre, Ogre battle, and Final Fantasy Tactics.
| HolyKnight5 chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Hmm...any thought on making a Final Fantasy Tactics/Naruto crossover?
After all..filgaia has Ninja class...what is was developed for Nukenin or guys fleeing from the Ninja continent into the Filgaia continent?
| Oros chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
It was interesting I'll give you that. I love tactics myself (and I'm a usual reader of yours ). While I've always been a bit of a Ramza/Agris (I forget how to spell her name -.-) and ramza/the knight who came with the Save the Queen sword (I can't remember her name at all -.- I need to go play tactics again...) I like what you did here.