Reviews for Veins All Tangled Close
liltrix chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
This was so adorable. Very well written too. :3 I loved it.
TheVelvetDusk chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
loved it.
LandonLover chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
The end was SO CUTE! The "prompt" was great...that's an awesome line. :) Very good...enjoyed the fighting. It always makes for good foreplay. ;) :-*
Just A Girl Of The Hollow x3 chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
loved cute!
milovroxmysox chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
aww its soo cutte
friendsqueen216 chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
i loved this story. it was so good. excellent job.
tragicallyepic chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
*le sigh* I loved it.
katesque chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
awesome stuff. i really really liked it! your writing is excellent!
StaleCoffee chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
"“Rock,” she whispered, “Paper. Scissors,” they both paused and she stepped forward again, tilting her head the tiniest bit. Jess dipped his head down toward her and she smiled, tangling her fingers with his.“Shoot,” he breathed against her mouth."

I really loved this ending. Entertaining, creative, and sweet. Great story!
DarkAngelSuicide chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
huh thats an intresting twist to the end. good story
Eliza S chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Great fic, i liked the idea of rock, paper and scissors very original.
Great Clone chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Awesome Fic. And I love how you used RPS as the whole theme...:)

(And now you got MakeDamnSure all stuck in my head. :p Thanks.)
lltn chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
that. was. perfection.

that's all i can say. it was perfect. great job!
Aims11085 chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
when you are on, you're on.

and you are always on.

you rock. hardcore.
someone5 chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Ep! Yay! This is amazing. :D So cute, so in-charater, so witty with the dialogue. This is definitely one of those 'Oh, if only it had really happened' fics. *kissies* Thank you for this. :) And thank Hider for me for giving you that brilliant prompt. *nods*
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