|Reviews for The effects of gravity|
| lolello chapter 13 . 1/31/2013
This story was amazing. I loved every second of it. It was heartbreaking but so true to the characters that it was totally believable. Well done :D
| JaniceC678 chapter 13 . 11/23/2012
Well, hadn't intended to sit here and finish this all in one shot, but I couldn't help myself. Well done! I loved the escape scene and David being reunited with his sister. And Dean finding Sam was just beautiful. I WAS kind of hoping for John to come around and realize what he was doing to Sam and for some sort of understanding and reconciliation, but, hey, your story, your version of John. Loved the tie in to it becoming the driving force behind Sam's resolve to go to college.
| JaniceC678 chapter 6 . 11/23/2012
Wow! About halfway through this, and LOVING it! SO intense. As much as John was apparantly a jerk in his dealings with teenage Sammy, his total breakdown when he thought Sam was gone and the grief at having to leave him behind to at least get Dean out was heartbreaking. And poor Sammy, feeling so abandoned and so hurt - thank goodness for little David, but even he is so heartbreaking, too. Can't wait to read more!
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
as a mother of 3, i would of done the same thing john did, there was no way he could get to sam, but he could at least make sure one of his kids got to safety, even if it kills you inside to leave on to save the other
| ancient midnight chapter 13 . 8/11/2012
you should really continue this.
| spnlittlebro chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
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| R chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
I'd love to read this, because I love a good adventure fic (with a side of Sam-whump, especially), and this shows all the signs of being one. But honestly, I just can't get past the punctuation issues. I hope you won't take that too harshly, because it's an easy issue to fix. Please, get a good beta, so that your awesome story can be shown at its best advantage.
| wolfish-willow chapter 13 . 7/5/2011
Good for Sam. He definitely needs to get away and I love that this is what strengthens his resolve to get into college. No matter what John and Dean say, it's an amazing accomplishment and he did so great through this whole fic and you are awesome for writing it.
| wolfish-willow chapter 12 . 7/5/2011
Excuse my language but thank /fuck/ Jennings punched John in the face and called him out on being such a horrible father. If he'd just gotten away with treating Sam like that after everything I don't know that I could have read the next bit to this, so you did awesome.
I /hate/ that John's new plan is to try and break Sam even further, try to hold him there and under his thumb and not even acknowledging how /amazing/ Sam was in surviving. Also, I was very happy when Dean punched him as well, but I hadn't commented.
And man, do I wish that Jennings could take them away from John :(
| SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 13 . 6/11/2011
Great story, very well-done. Loved reading it, you had the characters down great. I'm thinking of having "John Winchester is an Asshole" tattooed on my forehead. The man will just NEVER learn! :)
| CeCe Away chapter 13 . 1/1/2011
Intense much? Really loved wondering how Sam was going to get the heck out of there and Dean's belief that he wasn't gone. John, well, a little clueless in this one. It was fun how Sam kept Daniel to himself though. I really thought he would break. All in all, I'm so glad I stumbled on to this one.
| Ani101 chapter 2 . 9/3/2010
nooooooooooo don't leave Sammy behind!
sorry im getting kinda into this!
| Ani101 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
great story i love the preseries sam and dean stuff!
| Arilaen chapter 13 . 6/26/2010
LOVE IT! Arggghhhh John never learns or gives in does he?
I loved loved loved the story, my only advice is that you talk about Sam's thoughts about his dad and vice versa that in parts it's a little repetitive, you can get the same impact across with less words. But that wasn't too noticeable since I greatly enjoyed the story (and the sequel I've already read!) Yay Sam!
| betweenlife chapter 13 . 6/9/2010
Amazing masterpiece. :)