|Reviews for The effects of gravity|
| geminigrl11 chapter 7 . 9/10/2006
You have turned angst into an art form - it's just a beautiful, beautiful thing. Not only Sam's and Dean's - even John's - but Penny's too. She was the forgotten element in all of this (but you didn't forget her). Sam's on his way to freedom, but can he make it without human help? Bleeding again, still concussed, smoke inhalation threatening . . . he has definitely had about the worst day on record. And Dean needs to wake up from his concussion undamaged so that he can lead the charge. He's the only one (besides Sam) who hasn't given up.
More, more, ore! (please)
| Anora chapter 7 . 9/10/2006
Dang... :O Wow... I can't remember if this is AU... its looking like it though... Go Sammy!
| McB chapter 7 . 9/10/2006
Is sam EVER going to get out?
| bally2cute chapter 7 . 9/10/2006
The Winchesters need Sammy so much, and Sam doesn't seem to know that. I am so eager for Sam to get out of that house. I feel so bad for David (even though I still don't trust him), and I wonder what happened to his sister. I wish I could give Dean a hug, but he's probably going to be too pissed off to be approached. John has some dark things running through that head of his, but I can't imagine what Dean is thinking. Excellent stuff, and I can't wait for more.
| Rachelly chapter 7 . 9/10/2006
I'm finally back to reading fan fics a bit. I've been so consumed with writing my story and posting it.
Wow! Your story is awesome! Where do I begn? I love the whole concept, the angst with the brother's and father, David's character is intriguing,Sammy trapped below and his self examination. This chapter was especially great. I really loved John's thoughts about Sammy. You can see, I can go on and on!
Well done, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Oh, and thanks again for helping me get started here at FanFiction! Also, thanks for your kind reviews along the way. They helped me have the courage to keep going. You were really great and I'll always owe ya one for it.
Keep on writing!
| Raven524 chapter 7 . 9/9/2006
Man this was definately a double box of kleenex...first we have a large dose of Sammy angst as he stuggles from the fire, but wait we also get a preview of Sammy's TK powers...even as he comes up with a logical explaination. Then we move onto the moment when the sherrif learns that his daughter was dating the thought to be dead Sam Winchester.
As if there wasn't enough you throw in John angst and an emotionally packed moment when Sam and his ghost friend connect. Then ending with Dean's anguish. An emotional rollercoaster ride from beginning to end which leaves me standing in line waiting impatiently for the next ride!
| carocali chapter 7 . 9/9/2006
I forgot about poor Penny! Man, she's just sitting waiting for her next kiss! And David, chained in the basement, left to die like a roting piece of meat. Girl, you are just cruel.
It took me a second to figure out that Jennings was one of the names they've used in the series! Nice tie back! Can't wait to see what his specialty is in the world of hunting.
| TaintedXRose05 chapter 7 . 9/9/2006
| talon81 chapter 7 . 9/9/2006
great chapter! poor sam and little david! I hope sam gets out of there soon! update as fast as you can! :)
| Tori chapter 7 . 9/9/2006
OMG that was awesome! I love Sam Angst! Please update soon!
| Dawn N chapter 7 . 9/9/2006
Wonderful chapter! I love the angst :-)
Update again soon!
| friendly chapter 7 . 9/9/2006
awesome job, are you going to reunited them soon, not that I want to rush the story. I really like it. work those fingers faster...
| carocali chapter 6 . 9/7/2006
Crap! I thought I had reviewed - I'm so sorry! I am really loving David and my heart just breaks for him! And poor Sam, as if he's not hurt enough, now he's got fire to contend with! Yikes!
I really love that John is the source of the fire. Oh, it's so cruel! He will seal the fate of his son... unless, of course, he makes it out alive! I can't wait. This is so wonderful!
| elanurel chapter 6 . 9/3/2006
Wow. I really liked the way you got into both of the boys' heads in this one. How Sam went from being a normal teenager (the section with Penny was simply brilliant; I loved the description of his feelings for her) to flickers of the man he would become, and how Dean (inevitably, IMHO) went back to the fire. Always the fire... Excellent job as always!
| geminigrl11 chapter 6 . 9/3/2006
Roz, I am hanging on the edge of my seat! I can't even imagine how bleak things look from Dean's POV (John's too, the big . . .well, it's Sunday, so I won't say what I am really thinking of him!). Bad enough that Sam was already hurt, but now the building's completely collapsed on and it's ON FIRE! He's got to think there's no hope!
And honestly, I'm not far behind! Sam's trapped - led to a door he can't open with the fire chasing him and no one even thinking he's still alive! How are you going to get him out? (Am putting all my faith in you here - I know you won't let our Sammy die).
Post again! Quick! Need to know!