Reviews for Den
Kharlan Hero chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
I liked it. It's nice that they could be happy just spending the break together, not even talking very much. It was sad when their break ended though.
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Chibi Lloyd and Collete making a den is adorable. It was kinda depressing when their break ended.
Lilikoifish chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
cute! another great Colloyd oneshot by you, Samuu!

here's my only comment/critique:

“Shall I move that plant into here? It looks a bit lonely on that shelf over there,”

that seemed a bit OOC for Lloyd to say. for some reason, Lloyd doesn't seem to be the type who is concerned about plant decoration.

other than that, very cute. i love the vivid description. it gave me a very nice idea of the setting and surroundings.