|Reviews for Time to Try Again|
| CDV10 chapter 13 . 9/15/2007
Ouch, poor Trish. Chris is probably better off leaving her alone, I'm surprised she even let him speak to her after leaving her hanging the way he did. At least he said what he felt he had to say, which I guess is better than saying nothing at all. Anyways, this chapter was great, I loved the end with Adam making his comments about Stephanie with Chris... that was hilarious lol. I would say more insightful things here, but my brain is currently fried. I very much enjoyed this chapter, and I'm gonna try to read some more! Keep up the good work! :)
| Kay chapter 13 . 9/15/2007
I'm glad that Trish & Chris had their little chat. They really needed that. However, it was Adam who stole the show in this chapter. He has the same kind of quirky sense of humor.
Kuddos! Can't wait for more!
| TakerTakeMe chapter 13 . 9/6/2007
I totally expected for Trish to, like, start clawing and kicking Chris or something. He left her at the altar...as much as I hate to say it, she has the right to be upset. It's admirable of Chris to want to clear things up and give her an explanation and all, but Trish is a jilted woman... No way is she gonna see things his way right now... But like Stephanie said, she doesn't matter...
Adam is one crazy guy here. I like all the jokes he made...I think the whole ice cream in a kiddie pool sounds like something Chris and Stephanie would do. They're crazy people, they seem like they'd do something kinky like that! Lol..
| Jodi chapter 13 . 9/4/2007
Heh, you are so random that it is hilarious Nina. Ice Cream in a kiddie pool? Random! But yeah I really enjoyed this chapter, but as always, I always, always do. Adam was a nice touch also, he blended in well. And trish grates on my nerves, she so annoys me in this one. But go Chris for talking to her knowing she could kill him.
| CDV10 chapter 12 . 8/16/2007
Ha, well, you knew Trish had to come up somewhere. I still feel bad for Trish, that must be a horrible feeling to just kind of stumble upon your ex-fiance who left you stranded at the altar kissing his new girlfriend... who you KNEW he liked to begin with. Tsk, tsk tsk. Oh well, what can you do... Stephanie's right, it's not like they were doing it beforehand, when Chris was dating Trish. But anyways, it's still got to be hard for Trish, working there is gonna suck for her now. Ah well... the beginning was cute, and I'm sure Vince and Linda will flip when they hear the news, not like it matters lol. Good update all around, hope for more soon!
| Jodi chapter 12 . 8/7/2007
So very, very, very, very awesome. The awkwardness of hand holding is mighty complicated. I loved that part so very much. This whole chapter was great, which is no surprise, since you know you are awesome and that shows in your stories. Yes Shane, oh how I want to smack you. He's mean in this *glares* Ouch for Trish...but yeah can't say I'm not happy that they were kissing, cause yay! Trish so has to deal with it, she wasn't the one for him, move on. Heh, cannot, cannot, simply cannot wait to see how Vince and Linda reaction.
| Kay chapter 12 . 8/7/2007
Every chapter just makes me love this story more and more!
I love how they have the 'awkward' couple moments like trying to decide if holding hands is comfortable. That was just so Chris & Steph! I also like how they decided to just let the whole world know.
Of course, Shane being an ass will make things interesting along with Steph going ahead and telling mom & dad about them. Even more interesting will be the conversation that Chris has with Trish.
In the famous words of the Rock when it comes to the next chapter...
JUST BRING IT!
| A.J. Cena chapter 12 . 8/7/2007
Ahahaha that is soo perfect! Chris and Stephanie..against the world. That's basically what it is. Lol. Love them as a couple.
| TakerTakeMe chapter 12 . 8/7/2007
I liked the way they couldn't decide how they should hold hands or whatever. I've never really thought to talk that kinda thing over lol. I just kinda went with the flow... Shane is such a nosey little loser, it's like he has no life... He's just gotta go tattle on Stephanie like they're kids or something... And what are the odds of Trish walking up on Chris and Stephanie kissing? Just their luck, I suppose...
Great chapter, now I'm off to work!
| Kay chapter 11 . 7/24/2007
Oh my stars Nina, I think I could kiss you but in a non-sexual way. It would be more of a friendship way than anything:-D
Finally they are giving it a shot! I was so scared that she wasn't going to allow it to happen after the last chapter and man, Chris was totally bummed out (as was I) but it all worked out... well for the moment anyway.
Can hardly wait for the next chapter!
| Kay chapter 10 . 7/21/2007
Once again, the Queen of Swerves throws another one in this story... I so did not see the date ending the way that it did. It all seemed to be going well but then again, that's when you do your best work, isn't it?
I can hardly wait for more!
| CDV10 chapter 11 . 7/17/2007
Yes! She decided to give it a real chance! Finally, oh, and I'm glad they made the promise at the end to stay friends no matter what. That's a good insurance policy so to speak, a nice net to fall back on just in case. But here's hoping it doesn't come to that, because seriously, this has been a LONG time coming and these two are perfect for each other. You captured Chris's excitement well, and yes, very happy to see them moving on from that horrible date lol. Can't wait to read more!
| TakerTakeMe chapter 11 . 7/17/2007
This chapter just f'n rocked! I was so scared last week, could you tell? I'm so glad that Chris decided not to be a punk in this chapter and told her how he felt and that he loved her. And they kissed! A lot! They're right back the way they were before, only now they're kissing and stuff, and there's not a doubt in my mind that they can be something great together...
Awesome chapter, what a relief! And it seems like you did a mega update or something, so hopefully I won't get too far behind...
Better get back to cleaning... I'm supposed to be done by now but I couldn't resist a taste of your writing... It's Christmas in July, yay! Lol.
| BHH85 chapter 11 . 7/17/2007
Thought this was good. I think deep down Stephanie loves him but she just does not want to ruin Chris and Her Friendship. I can relate to this story because I was in Chris's shoes before. I like and Can relate to this story. It's hard to tell a Girl thats your Best Friend you Love them because of what they'll say. Nina Good Going good Chapter Hope to see more God Willing Peace God Bless
| Jodi chapter 11 . 7/17/2007
Okay like, that was just like, my favourite chaptter, ever. Ever. It was great. So great Nina, greatness is what it was. That ending? Man I just have a sappy smile from that ending. Heh, super awesome.
'You’re trying to make Rice Krispie treats out of Cocoa Puffs here, Snooks.' I found this line to be hilariously funny, I laughed a lot at it, why? Because it was fuhnee. I love that she kissed him and I doubly loved his reaction. And you're so right Red Vines are way better than Twisters, Twisters are the vilest.
I also loved that Chris made up his mind and just stormed into her room only to find her asleep, priceless. But what I loved most, other than the kissing and the ending, was how both of them wanted to stay friends if this didn't work out, because if they didn't stay friends then they'd be losing really important to them.
Cannot wait for more of this story.