Reviews for The Light in the Dark Part II
bestfriend1245 chapter 22 . 11/6/2010
Nightshroud chapter 22 . 5/13/2007
Hey, I got around to finishing this story. I'll read part three next week. Anyway I loved the job you did with it. Kakashi and Mayu is so sweet! Lol Mayu and Kika's bra fight was hillarious. And I loved the 99 bottles of sake on the wall. Haha that's so Naruto! Later
scipunx chapter 22 . 9/15/2006
Oh yay! You're gonna write Part I! I just published the sequel to Unchain my Bound Heart.
Inquisitor Soren chapter 22 . 9/14/2006
You have to write a 3rd story this great
LoveAnime4ever chapter 22 . 9/13/2006
Wow! That was a cute ending! ...



...*still drooling over Kakashi's abs and barechest*...

...anyways lol. Seriously, when that part came up, you just can't resist the fact that you'd want to get in his pants...

JOKING! lmao!

But yeah, the story was awesome! I had so much fun reading it and you update really fast too! So i practically get ot read it everyday! Which was even better!

Anyways! Can't wait till the third story comes out!

Keep up the good work! Ja ne!
LoveAnime4ever chapter 21 . 9/11/2006
. Im sorry but the last part was hilarious! "Does he have a brother?" Woot woot!
scipunx chapter 20 . 9/9/2006
-jumps up and down like a crazy fangirl- You'd better update soon! I wonder what happens next...
scipunx chapter 19 . 9/8/2006
CHAKRA OUTAGE! Mayu's gonna be fine! I bet you!
scipunx chapter 18 . 9/5/2006
Whoa! I didn't see that coming! ARGGHH! Keibo's gonna die!
MizuiroHiei chapter 17 . 9/5/2006

I'm so happy. and yet... not. I'm sad for Kakashi. Everything seems to go bad for him.

*cry* WHY HIM?

Maybe it's because of his pretty face, right?



Your Eager Reader,

MizuiroHiei chapter 16 . 9/2/2006
*shwing!* you didn't do what I thought you would! Yes that makes me happy!

So this story jsut keeps getting better and better! I wonder what's gonna happen next chapter *so excited*...

So I anxiously await chappie 17.

Your Eager Reader,

scipunx chapter 16 . 9/1/2006
The Twilight Forest reminds me of the Twilight Zone... lol. LOVE CONQUERS ALL! .~
Aori Kenji chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
very good i enjoyed it alot you have a very fresh writing style so it is cool to hear your story unfold. by the way if you want you can check out both of my NAruto stories. One is about what would happen to Naruto if he had a sharingan to rival Sasuke and the other is about what would happen if Naruto had become a missing nin after sasuke. read them and review them if you can. i will definetly keep reading yours.

MizuiroHiei chapter 14 . 8/30/2006
So... while I was reading this... a thought occured to me.

An evil thought of something that Kika could do and TOTALLY ruin Kakashi and Mayu's relationship. I really hope you're not going to do what I'm thinking.


Amazing. I feel awful for Yuki, though... Who knew Naruto could be such a heartbreaker?

Update son!

Your eager reader,

scipunx chapter 14 . 8/29/2006
Naruto, you dumbass! You've just ruined your first chance with a girl, for god's sake! Good chapter, by the way.
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