brilliant! I love the line about the godforsaken banshee! I'm still laughing!

this isn't bad but it's short and Dumbledor should be Dumbledore

People were saying that Harry breaking down was the only OOC thing!? This whole story is beyond OOC! Wtf!

Why was it raining in December in the middle of Britten?

How the fuck did they already know sev was his soulmate?!

Another brat who thinks rape is something you can just casually throw around without any warnings or even bloody fucking sensitivity.

Use that little pea size thing in your head called a brain, and think about what might happen if a rape victim read this without a warning of rape being carelessly mentioned.

People who have been violated in such a way suffer from panic attacks when they are triggered.

Your absolute lack of sensitivity to something like this is appalling.

You figure that Harry would make a deal with voldemort to join and kill domblador for lying and wanting to kill his child before Harry could even see him/her.

I thought it was a ring

Haha go sev and Harry

This is really good

That was fucking fast

Hun, it's great! Keep making more!

i have a weird obsession with purring usually in stories with vampires to their mates

Haaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaaa...

Amazing job, I just love your story! I especially love how you make the characters have similar personalities to the book and don't change them dramatically. Keep up the good work:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)