love it :D

All I have to say is very good. I love it and I am not a fangirl. This is just how I am all of the time. I also look kind of like you with the brown hair but my glasses have plastic frames. But they do look good on me also my eyes are brown. So thank you for writing all of the great stories!

Okay I can tell you that I already love the story and I just started reading it. I hope you write a lot more stories like this. It's great and you are an awesome writer so thank you for making my day.

do you have your stories anywhere else? they are deleting stuff like this.

I hate to say this but I think I like the commentary a tad bit more than the story... But I love the story too! Snarry is my fav.

XD

"The crazy frog is coming and everyone is jumping. New York to San Francisco and inter city disco. The wheels still are turning and traffic lights are burning. So if you like to party get on and move you're body."

The correct lyrics being:

The Crazy Frog is coming, and everyone is jumping

New York to San Francisco, an intercity disco

The wheels of steel are turning, and traffic lights are burning

So if you like to party, get up and move your body.

Also, Crazy Frog was originally Vengabus, and I know all that because I received The Party Album on tape for Christmas when I was seven.

wow

X x x x(A/N: About half of this lemon is cut off, I had about six pages on twelve font written, bondage, blood play, oral, anal, est. but there was a total of about seven lemons total and I decided that that would amek Severus and Harry a little inhuman.).

Would you post this as maybe a oneshot or companion piece?

Ps: absolutely love the story!

Great story so far, excellent job enduring

Amazing story!

Luv,

Lilyjames

awesome story)

I love this story so far, the plot twist is great, and I'm definitely reading to the end even though it's now five am, so I don't want to leave a criticism that probably won't get read anyway...but seriously! The in-text author notes! Gah, sorry. It's major pet peeve of mine. The story's flowing, I'm really getting into the plot...and then a random (A/N: awww, isn't that so cute?) just jolts me out of the chapter and ruins it. Like when you're trying to write and someone starts chattering at you, it's distracting and irksome and you have to spend another five minutes getting your nice happy concentration back.

I really do like this story- which is why the a/n's bother me so much, I don't like being abruptly and needlessly distracted from good work! Okay, rant over. Ta!

Loved it!

EEEEEE! Sev asked Harry to marry him! XD I love it! I definitely gasped out loud at that part and got a huge smile on my face. :)

if harry was raped didnt he already lose his virginity?