Reviews for 25 March 1420
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
This story was a good read.

I liked how you focused on just one event of the day, and then made that event into a story. I did catch a few grammatical mistakes: the word "ccrashing" need to have the extra "c" taken out and "apologising" should be spelt as "apologizing". These were just mistakes I caught that I figured you should be aware of.

Your descriptions were good and vivid. I liked this story and have favorited it. Good work.

-Aria Breuer