|Reviews for Open Your Eyes|
| ninjamidori chapter 20 . 12/28/2013
Holy shit that was perfect. Fucking peeeerrrrffffeeeeeecccccct.
| DarkHanyou21 chapter 20 . 6/3/2012
This Has Been an awesome stor! I love everything you did to it! I have to say this was one of the best stories ever! Thanks for writing this one! Its given me some more things in life to understand and I Love your username!
| Sorrow is Unavoidable chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
First off, I loved this story. It is based off of Cinderella, but it had many plot twists and turns, and the writing is overall detailed. The story is, in my eyes, unique.
The characters. You gave them a personality, and you stuck to it. You showed changes in them as they grew, such as Kagome near the ending. You also captured the personalities beautifully, and they aren't always bouncing here and there.
And your depiction of magic and such is amazing really, making it seem different than what other people may think. You made familiars and gave information on it.
And the best part I loved the most, the action, romance, drama. It had all of those, and just simply used the plot to help convey these genres. The romance steadily built between Inuyasha and Kagome, and it wasn't just instant and forced upon. The plot twists really did add tons of drama, and how each character would respond would create action, with help of the plot.
However, in the end you should have added something a bit... More. I felt as if it was missing something, probably like what happened after and all, or Inuyasha's and Kagome's relationship.
But overall, this story is one of my favorites, beautifully written. It takes it time, and does not rush. It builds up suspense and drama, and there are many twists.
| waterbottleandpillows chapter 20 . 8/4/2011
Amazing. I finished your story in one sitting and well, I'd have to say that this is one of the most well-written, well thought of and well executed pieces of fiction I've ever read. Great job!
| nekotaishou chapter 20 . 6/20/2010
You are an amazing story writer! This was absolutely incredible! Im curious what goes on in that head when you come up with such creativity? Your style in writing is wonderful and the way you word things...im speechless. I can see you've put a lot of thought in this just by looking at the astute way you describe things like love and revenge. God my eyes are sparkling with admiration! Thanks for letting me(as well as others) read such a splendid piece of quality work. I really enjoyed it so very much.
| Mini Nicka chapter 20 . 5/15/2010
Fantastic story I loved the twists
| OceanGoddess101 chapter 10 . 9/27/2009
| Callista MacLeod chapter 20 . 5/27/2009
When I first started reading this, I was afraid it's be like "Just Ella." But even though it shared some similarities, they were purely coincidental.
Besides that fact that your grammar, spelling, punctuation, (et cetera) are nearly flawless, your imagery and character development were marvelous. The only part of the story that jumped out at me as being strange was that you said Kagome's stepmother had burned the photographs of Kagome's mother...which confused me about the time period (so did the guns, a bit, but I just assumed they were revolvers, not modern handguns).
All that aside, I have one important question: why did you make this as an Inuyasha fanfiction? Some AU fanfictions are still similar enough to their counterparts that writing them as "original fiction" would be possibly infringing on copyrights. But this story seems unique enough from the characters that, if you were to change their names, it could stand as an original work. (You might have to then give a bit more background to the personalities of some individuals that were glossed over, like Kouga, but that's not so hard.)
And let's face it: people love new takes on ":The Cinderella Story." You could put it to , or even try to get it published...
Honest. I really think that with fairly little work, you could make this into an original story. And I wholeheartedly encourage it.
...just a thought. ;)
| SwagSammich78 chapter 20 . 7/29/2008
I loved it! I loved how realistic and well developed Inuyasha and Kagome's love were. And even now at the end you can see they still have a long way to go, but it doesn't matter because they can help each other.
Thanks for the good read :)
| SwagSammich78 chapter 18 . 7/29/2008
Hells yea! You Go, Kagome!
...not a very helpful review, I know, but take that as a "Good job" :)
| SwagSammich78 chapter 12 . 7/29/2008
AH! He so loves her.
That bastard Hojo :(
| SwagSammich78 chapter 10 . 7/29/2008
thank GOD. Someone who wants the romance to develope instead of rushing into it and making it look unrealistic. I commend you :)
The only thing I don't really like is Kagome's attitude. It fits in well with the story and she is well written, don't get me wrong, she's just seeming so naive and annoying to me with her petty arguments and all. But with her in the situation she's in, i'm sure i'd be the same way if I were in her place. So even she's not bothering me that much.
Anyways, this story is amazing, an original spinoff of a popular theme (you know, the whole princess thing and all), and a pleasure to the eyes. I'm enjoying reading it and it has a sure spot in mah favorites.
| Misslover chapter 20 . 3/29/2008
this was very good
| Kipcha chapter 20 . 2/19/2008
In have a few things to say, one of which is that I will never think of Cinderella the same again You have an awesome gift for writing, and I hope at some time I can get up to your level.
| Kipcha chapter 18 . 2/19/2008
Alright, I thought now would be a good time to review!
I'm LOVING your story, it's totally awesome and I can't wait to finish!
Although I think Kirara would have made a better familiar then Buyo...