Poor Richard I feel sorry for him. It's not his fault Lois has basically lied to him for YEARS! I know that was not your intention but Lois is really a witch (replace the w with a b). I think I mentioned that it was really bad of her taking Jason out to the yacht like that. Well at least she's driving better now. Poor Clark. :P

"galactically stupid" Hehehe yep, that's Lois. I'm glad she came to that realization. How come she didn't realize she was "galactically stupid" everytime she put herself in harms way? Always depending on Superman to save her. (Which I think might take his time away from saving other people from other dangers.) Well...maybe Jason will pick up his dad's intelligence.

Great chapter I really like how everything flowed so well and the dialogue in general. Looking forward to see what else you come up with. :)

NO u cant leave it like this!... wut happens wit richard and lois? and wut bout lil' Jason!... WUT BOUT SUPERMAN!...pls continue... it was really good and i absolutely love the plot! o and GO SUPERMAN... and batman, but hes another story lol...

I like it.

wow! English isn't your first language? i know plenty of people for whom English is their first language and they cant articulate as well as that.

keep up the goo job!

Good chapter, thanks for the update.

Aw, poor Clark - he really needs the sun bad! You just want to give him some chicken soup and massages! Ahem! Anyhoo, the whole time reading this chapter I was wondering, among other things, why is Clark so weak and so tired? I know its evening and it's raining, but I think there's more to it than just lack of sunlight. Anyway, I was also thinking that Lois is not quite herself. She's much too nice to him, but he is feeling miserable and she does feel sorry for what he's going through.

Loved my little guy, Jason, he always brings joy and innocence to any situation. Loved that part! And I'll just say poor Richard, and leave it at that.

It's just me, but I must admit I want more angst and more confrontation. Everybody seems to be holding it in! That's not good in any situation. It's like, you don't know what's going to happen next. I know, they can only say so much, though with Jason within ear-shot.

This is definitely one of my favorites. And welcome back, and thanks for updating!

I really like your story, the plot is very interesting! I enjoy reading about Clark/Superman being cared for by others for once. I hope things get better for Richard, too! Thanks for sharing! -

yet another great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.

Fantastic job! Please continue (and lol sooner than in 3 months ;) :)

Mona

can't wait for an update!

awesome story! i really like what you've done so far! please continue with it soon!

Oh, really great chapter! Richard and Clark's moment were very awkward but perfect! And Jason is just as cute as I execpted! I love that story! :D

Interesting. I love the premise of this fic (I actually have Clark still feeling ill in my fic [What? A shameless plug? Of course not! ;)]), and you do have some good humor in it. You do, however, have a few grammatical errors (tense changes and the like) and some writing tends to be a bit repetetive (Specifically with thoughts. Characters seem to think the same thing in slightly variating ways several times), but I do like this a lot.

Two nit-picks, though: 1.) If Clark is dense enough to bend a needle on his arm, then wouldn't he weight a lot more than his 225 pounds? 2.)"He could be hovering near the Moon, listening to the entire world, and he would find her heartbeat in an instant." Actually, no, he couldn't, considering that sound doesn't travel in a vacuum...

lovin' it! keep it comin':-) can't wait for next post.

Yay! Amazing chapter! Very worth the wait! Please, please, please update soon!