| Reviews for The Day After |
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  kalelofspace chapter 6 . 2/3/2007 wow ur back...what a funny chapter... i love the brith jokes they kept me laughing ...UPDATE |
 mistressbabette51 chapter 6 . 2/2/2007 Hooray, you're back! *clapping hands* Ok, my favorite and funny parts, Superman in the elevator; remembering his forgotten items of clothing; the "giving birth and baby" jokes; being broke and unable to pay his hospital bill (please don't ask me... hilarious); and of course, being back in Lois' car. (haha) Interesting? I'll say - the four of them under one roof! Oh, boy, how are they going to pull this off, without Richard finding out the truth? It will not be easy, to say the least. |
| Doppleganger33 chapter 6 . 2/1/2007 I hate to say this (no I don't I LOVE saying it! :P) but Lois is a bad mother. She can do whatever she wants with her life but when she endangered Jason like that she crossed the line. I'm glad you brought that up. So far so good, keep going! And yes...thanks for all the little easter eggs you plant in the story. :D |
| Freedom Tide chapter 6 . 2/1/2007 love the chapter, i love where the story's going. please post more & please make it a long story or at least write a sequal? |
| dmdhadlakes.com chapter 6 . 2/1/2007 I loved the humor in this story and will be waiting for an update. Thanks |
| Dadaiiro chapter 6 . 2/1/2007 yeah... I can imagine how interesting that would be! those four under the same roof... where will Clark be staying? and... will Richard be updated on Superman's identity? why is the scar not healing? will he be left powerless? like a human? what will he do if that's it? an anyone go and get those cristals? oh, I hope everything goes fine. please update soon! |
| katie chapter 6 . 2/1/2007 another great poor clark he loves lois but feels he has to step a side for richard |
| AgiVega chapter 6 . 2/1/2007 The nursery joke was really excellent :) Can't wait for more. |
| LA Suka chapter 6 . 1/31/2007 This is great; I loved the humerous parts as much as the dramatic parts. Looking forward to your next update! |
| Blueowl chapter 6 . 1/31/2007 Great story, so glad you updated, :) Really enjoy the depth you've put into this and how you use a spectrum of emotions, especially humor. YAY! Clark's left the hospital! Loved Lois' crazy driving part :D So you really mean that you will update again soon? Please do :) |
| sunkisst chapter 6 . 1/31/2007 great job! and dont feel bad...i havent updated my fic in over a month...heh |
| Mona chapter 6 . 1/31/2007 Glad to see you back! So suspensful. I do wonder though why no one at the hospital has questioned Lois about her constant presence but in another way good for the hospital staff that they were able to see a man in need rather than become vultures onto a superhero as in the past. I loved the inflection of Clark humor at the end. I of course hope he will be okay and maybe this story can delve into the possibility of tyring to find a Kryptonite preventative? Anyway welcome back, great update. |
| annwitch chapter 6 . 1/31/2007 Very nice! I love the direction the story is going. And frankly, I don't care if it takes you two months to get out the chapter if its going to be as good as your previous chapters have been. Keep up the great work! ;) |
| Christy T chapter 6 . 1/31/2007 wow, great chapter! update soon! |
| t wrecks chapter 5 . 1/14/2007 psst...been 2 months...anyway you got Clark & Lois down, but Richard left to conveniently, and Jason isn't on target. Work a bit more, I also wonder why others arn't wondering about Superman & Lois when she took him to hosp. Still good just needs tightened up a bit. |