Reviews for The Day After |
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Freedom Tide chapter 5 . 1/11/2007 please update :-) i'm loving where this story is going. |
mistressbabette51 chapter 2 . 1/5/2007 Hey there, I'm reading your story again, I love it so much. Can we please have an update to the story. It would really make my day, what am I saying, my year! I know, I have no life. (hehe) What can we do to get those juices flowing again? Huh? I know real life can be a b**ch, so when you get some time, please, please update. And thanks again for an incredible read. |
Chauncey chapter 1 . 1/3/2007 Frances! What a great story! ... I am sorry that I didn't leave a review before, but with the holidays and everything... I just re-read it and thought I'd leave you a little something. Very interesting how quickly Lois finds out about Clark being Superman? It does hold merit as he would still obviously be in pain.. but I'm not sure I like how nice and generous Lois was? I thought that there should have been a bit more of that, "suck it up!" attitude... ;) Regardless, very well done and I'm looking forward to part 2!~ |
MsSupaFan chapter 5 . 12/25/2006 I stumbled across your story and read all the chapters. WOW I LOVE IT! Please write more soon! |
shadowhunter chapter 1 . 12/22/2006 WOW. Are you SURE you're not English? You write extremely well, and the plot you have is excellent. What i've read, every chapter, is in PERFECT English and very well-described, with an air of suspense and humor that i don't see a lot here in fanfiction. PLEASE keep writing - i'm waiting for more! |
M chapter 5 . 12/19/2006 But it's already been a month. |
Phoenix Skyborne chapter 5 . 12/14/2006 Great story! Can't wait for more! |
the-illuminaughty-confirmed chapter 5 . 12/7/2006 Cripes! This is friggin awesome! I can't wait for more! |
Dadaiiro chapter 5 . 12/6/2006 wow! this fic is really interesting! I really hope Clark gets well soon. please update as soon as you can! |
JadedTruth chapter 5 . 11/30/2006 o man give me more, i love your story. please update soon |
RoswellianMisha chapter 5 . 11/25/2006 Well, I'm finally able to post a review! FF has been horrible these past days... Anyway! YAY! YOU DID ADD THE PART! WOHO! And it was really great to get to see what he was going through. Gosh, the fixation with the suit still makes me laugh. I'm sticking to the fact that he was in shock and that's why he kept thinking about it :P The tears thing, it made my heart ache. Now, as shocking as the relevation about Jason is, Clark is going to understand. He has to. And Lois has to understand it as well. Under that circumstance... gees... poor Jason too! I still insist that is going to be *very* interesting to have all those four under one roof! At least the worst for Clark has already passed, at least physically speaking ;) |
mistressbabette51 chapter 5 . 11/16/2006 We've waited patiently for your update... and...I loved it. Clark telling his version of what happened. Now we understand why he didn't fight back. I mean he was able to lift that island into the sky with that Kryptonite still inside of him, but he couldn't fight back before Luthor stabbed him? Your explanation was brilliant. Thanks for the update. More, please. |
noux chapter 5 . 11/15/2006 Wow, just saw your fic. You went far with superman health but I love it. Poor thing -_- I love how it breaks little by little Lois anger. Great job so far! Well I wonder if the NK part is necessary as it's more of a description. Maybe it would have been better to leave the descriptive parts and emphasize on his own feelings becasue we already saw this part. But just my idea _ I loved the first chapters with him getting sicker and sicker and Lois taking care of things. Great! Please go on! |
Doppleganger33 chapter 5 . 11/13/2006 Another great addition to your fic Taina. I liked the little connection you made of the first movie floozy to this current floozy. Luthor's such a sleeze bucket that he WOULD go for the flakiest girls just so he could get...oops getting off track. Yes , Luthor needs to go to jail BADLY. He was just so evil in that movie. I really enjoy how you portray Clark in this. I say CLARK because in this fic he is human. And I do so enjoy seeing Superman's human side. Now can you see why I like "Lois and Clark" so much? :P Anyways nice fic, keep up the good work. |
Arhazivory chapter 5 . 11/13/2006 Oh poor Lois. It's not like it was cold blooded murder - it was either her or him...Jason made a good choice. |