Great chapter!

Oh man! What a ... a... SWELL chapter!

Great chapter. I loved the recounting of the New Krypton events from Superman's point of view. Seeing him vulnerable, especially considering that normally he is viewed as the Man of Steel, does bring him closer both emotionally and physically to being a human. I also liked Lois' anger at Superman being called an alien, and the statement that he actually embodies the best traits of humanity. I must admit though, what Jason did can't be classified as murder. It was more self-defense, or as the case may be, the defence of his mother. I don't hold that against Jason at all, considering I would do exactly the same thing if I had the ability. Richard's attitude towards Lois and loving her enough to let her go and be happy with another man just shows his strong inner will and also proves that that man definitely does Lois and Jason completely and truly. Great work on the whole chapter, and thank you for adding the extension onto chapter four. It was vastly entertaining to read. Whew! Now this is a long review. Hope to read more soon.

love it

GJ with the story! i love it and cant wait for another update about where the story will go. And i pity Clark too...

Yay! Poor Superman though. Being sick and having to hear all that about Jason... not nice. Yours is the first fic I've yet come across which deals with that.

Update soon!

What will happen next? Will Lois tell Superman what happened on the boat and how/why Jason killed the guy? Is Jason aware of what he did and how he did it? Please post more as soon as possible.

So... why would Superman sleep in outer space (with no air, significant temperature problems, and the impossibility of relaxing for even a moment) rather than zip home to Smallville for a snooze?

Whoa that was incredibly powerful! Thank you for continuing and lol and update better not take another couple months! I admire Clark so much and at last so does Lois. Also have to give kudos to Richard. Anyway keep up the great work and obviously let S be okay! :)

Wow! I love ur fic since I have just fallen in love with Brandon Routh!

Hey there! Just a shout out for you to come back and post! You CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE! come on... you told me you were going to add that Superman-in-the-hospital scene, and I'm still dying to read that!

Seriously though, I hope all is well and that you can continue this story, even if you have to take some time to re-think the plot and stuff, or if real life is too consuming right now...

Hope to see you soon!

Misha

love it! and i only saw one grammatical mistake! good job, i'm impressed writing in a second language sucks! well good job! update soon!

I hope you're gonna continue this story soon; I've been having so much fun reading it! You're really good at keeping a reader's attention. I wasn't going to read beyond the first chapter initially, but that last line totally got me. And I'm glad it did! The story's really enjoyable. (And, I'll admit, I had to try really hard not to laugh loud enough to wake up all my dormmates at the "He's pregnant!" thing. Oh, that caught me completely off guard...)

As for grammar issues...practically non-existant. For someone whose native tongue isn't English, you certainly write better in it that a lot of us English-only folk!

Anyway, this fic is really entertaining, and I hope you decide to update soon. I'm gonna put it on my Story Alert so I can be sure to catch the next chapter as soon as it comes out. Thanks for the great read, and keep up the good work!

First of all, that you SO much for not ending chapter four with the 'I'm sorry line!'

I'm really loving this fic: I love the way you rachet up the emotional tension, but still manage to squeeze in a bunch of jokes. The 'he's in labor' sequence was great.

Also loving those subtle Gargoyles references ('Officer Morgan') - aah, those were the days:)

Okay, so was this long enough for you?

Oh, that would have just been cruel if you had ended it there. Very good chapter. Can't wait to see what you have coming up next.