Reviews for The Day After |
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ffreaderwriter chapter 2 . 9/17/2006 Well, that is definitely going to make his exit harder. Oh, and I meant to say this on the first chapter. I sometimes just write as I go so I know what you mean about not knowing what will happen. |
ffreaderwriter chapter 1 . 9/17/2006 Very interesting beginning. I like the idea. |
Leo chapter 4 . 9/12/2006 "At least he wouldn’t be at death’s door!" *takes a drink* :-P (Drinking game: 1 drink for each occurance of "at death's door" , "mind body and soul" , or any Michael Jackson reference) |
BornfromDarkness chapter 4 . 9/8/2006 oohh!lovely! :) update soon please? its a wonderful fic! and are you going to imprison Luthor? |
Doppleganger33 chapter 4 . 9/8/2006 Hey Taina. Greetings from Toronto! Had to stop BY and say that you've done a great job with this. Poor Richard! He's so sweet and lovable but man he really doesn't deserve to be put through the wringer like this. Though gah(!) you do it in such a hilarious way, the way he keeps doubting if he's Jason's father. "Maybe that piano has something to do with it." Ya think? And how can Jason be the only one who knows? The pregnant joke that's just...gold. They are never going to live that one down are they? I like how you are using little elements from the movie (how many viewings now?)and are integrating them into the fic. I always thought that food they were eating was a wrap. "As do I." XD You know why I loved THAT line. And YEAH finally that snob Lois realized what a horrible...wench, yes...wench she's been to Clark. |
BellaCordelia chapter 4 . 9/8/2006 I like your story. I'm not sure what I would change if I got my 2 cents worth in, but I think you have a great plot going and I look forward to more. |
RoswellianMisha chapter 4 . 9/8/2006 If it was the policeman who told the story that way, then that man has no sense of dark humor... I was really really really dying to get to see Superman's point of view of what was happening at the hospital in the ER... um... maybe a flashback or something? pretty please? hehehe Girl, is that going to be tense... those three under one roof... Take your time! Loving the story! |
mistressbabette51 chapter 4 . 9/8/2006 That update was definitely worth the wait. I love your story. Please continue. |
FourthKnock chapter 4 . 9/8/2006 Oh, you're such a good person! Yeay for no-cliffhanger! *cheers* Wonderful new chapter, wonderful story actually. I hope our dear Superman will recover soon from giving birth. :p |
astasia chapter 4 . 9/8/2006 Great!I love this ff..i love as you descrive lois and clark...(we want a kis! _-) please update soon as you possibile! Bye from Italy! |
Jedi-Bant chapter 4 . 9/8/2006 yes it would have been mean to stop there, thanks for continuing. Great chapter, love the on going pregnancy joke. please please please have Richard bring it up when they get back to the house, maybe in an arkward silence at dinner or something like that. please update soon lov JEDI_BANT |
kat303 chapter 4 . 9/7/2006 Hi I like this story. It's very cute... Jason who knows more than Richard. Richard who can't believe that the childs eyes have seen something he can't see. And Lois who wants to help Superman - and shakes him at the same time for leaving her. Wonderful storie! lg P.S. English isn't my language too. I'm german, so please excuse my mistakes. |
bluecatdevil chapter 4 . 9/7/2006 Wonderful chapter! Nice to see Lois thinking about how things felt for Clark when no-one noticed him at the planet. Is Richard finally going to get a clue and realise who Superman is? |
Mona chapter 4 . 9/7/2006 Awesome chapter! Superman has to be okay he has to, lol. :) I love how you wrote Lois FINALLY realizing how horribly unkind she especially but Clark's plnaet co-workers in general have been to him. They do all treat him as if he does not exist except when he offers to help them of course. Will S's suit be delivered from the "cleaners?" before anyone at the hospital has a chance to get suspicious? I loved that line. Please continue asap |
calsax chapter 4 . 9/7/2006 I would have pulled my hair out if you left the chapter at the doctor's line. I'm glad that you didn't. You have to be nice to your readers too, you know. Lol! Great work on this chapter. I loved the radio announcement and I love that Richard is so concerned about Superman eventhough he may be losing his family to the man. Update your next chapter soon now. |