Reviews for The Day After
Cenzo chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
update soon
heroinelovesheroes chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
Hey! It's Heroine again. Nice job! If you ask me, this is a great cliffhanger! Please write more soon!

Heroine
AgiVega chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
It's not easy to write a totally dramatic scene and insert a few lines that make the reader laugh out loud, but you managed it. Those jokes about labour and the maternity ward were totally hilarious in the middle of a deadly serious situation. Bravo!
mistressbabette51 chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
I love this story. You have run the gamat of emotions and it's only been three chapters - anger, pain, regret, love, compassion. Wow! And yes, that was definitely a cliffhanger. Will the doctors be able to help Superman? What about his super powers? Will his powers come back? What if they don't? I cannot wait. Please update soon.
Doppleganger33 chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
Haha! What can I say, I had a BLAST reading this. It was such a fun story, full of energy. The way you wrote Lois and Clark was masterful. I don't think I've ever enyoyed them that much (except for Lois and Clark the tv show).

Loved it! And the joke, XD, let's see if other's can catch that.
vicky chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
A great story so far! I love it and can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't let me wait to long :)
calsax chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Oh, dear. This doesn't look too good. I hope Supes recovers. I love the conversation between Supes and Lois. I think it was exceptionally well-done. Now I'm on tenterhooks just like Lois waiting to see what else is going to befall our beloved hero. Great work and I need you to update that chapter four soon!
automated detour chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
aw. lois should have just stuck clark out in the sun instead of drive him crazy with her persistence to take him to the hospital. i bet the prolonged absence of any light made it worse. can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Kaimi Hoshi chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
OMG! I am on the edge of my seat here! And all I can say is OMG THIS IS AWSOME!
Mona chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Wow, great chapter. I am sure wondering and of course hoping that the hospital goes right on believing that Clark is Superman without realizing he's Clark too. Maybe, lol, Lois can "pick up" his suit very quickly from the cleaners and save the day.
JenniferRSong chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Hi, there! You may not think that's much of a cliffhanger but I disagree. It's big to me. This story is pretty good, muy bien. Keep it up. You're doing a good job. See you in the next chapter. Adios por ahora.
Jedi-Bant chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
I love this fic, please update soon.
neko-chibi-faithkitty chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
This is so good! I love it! Please update soon I can't wait to read more!
nikki101389 chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Wow! this story is awesome, I can't wait for chapter 4 :)
suede79 chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Excellent! Very exciting story! Can't wait for more!
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