Reviews for The Day After
Mr. Beeto chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
I've gotta say that this is a wonderful premise. and it was interesting chat in the car on the way.

It'll be interesting to see how you handle the fallout: Superman showing up in the emergency room in civilian clothes; Richard; and will anyone realize the Lois took Clark home, just to show up at the emergency room with Superman.

I'm looking forward to more.
closetfan chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Not much of a cliffhanger...HA! We only have a dying Superman that disappeared into the bowels of a hospital. Lois pointing a poison pen towards Luther, and forgiveness without the whole truth.

And you want us to what?...WAIT FOR CHAPTER FOUR? GAH!
Christy T chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
aww, poor Clark! Can't wait for the next chapter!
i need more coffee chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
what the hell.. update

he cant die there is no way he can die

he's superman
Leo chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
... and the hero suffering continues :P
RoswellianMisha chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Like you said before, "OH CRAP!" O_O!

That man is in some serious pain! :bawl:

For some reason, I somehow think that Clark would have prefered if Lois had called an ambulance... hehehe I could so see his fear when Lois is calculating how to go racing through the traffic.

Can't wait for chapter 4! Come back soon!
Angel452 chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
What will happen next? What will Lois write for her article? How will she explain all this to Jason and Richard? Please post more as soon as possible.
katie chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
love it
htbthomas chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
There were quite a few laugh-out-loud moments in this! I liked the mix of humor and pathos.

I wonder why he kept going on and on about his suit? Is there something special in it, not just the fact that his identity could be compromised?

Hmm.

Looking forward to the next one!
LachesisBenton chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
wow, Lois to the rescue

Wonderful chapter ;-)

I can't wait for more!
Fluffy0987 chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Argh, why is a chapter always finished when it;s starting to get soo good. I'd say you're doing it on purpose. Very nice chapter. You got me on the edge of my seat. (literally, I was practically falling off...)

Please update soon, I know you're not going to kill off Supes, but that doesn't relieve any of the tension...

maaike-fluffy
Eviefan chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Ahh seeing him sick is bad, the poor man needs his sunlight to heal. I hope that everything will be okay.

Eviefan
liesltheweasl chapter 3 . 8/29/2006
Wow, Lois sure is a woman to be reckoned with!

Great chapter!
Prathna chapter 2 . 8/26/2006
awsome stuff. keep it up, dieing for the next one.
heroinelovesheroes chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Hi, I'm Heroine. Your story is SENSATIONAL! I LOVE IT!

Please write more! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

I love any kind of story with heroes, romance, humor, and a pinch of danger.

Write again soon!

Heroine
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