Great story!

Il love the story

Great story

This whole story was just a dragger except first few chapters. All clark had to say is ' i need sunlight'. And the BS with guilty clark is sooo fucking annoying. This guy CAN have any fucking girl on earth, hell wonder woman even, but voluntarily let's himself be dangled like he was a regular man? I'm glad movies are non canon, especially this 1 this fic was made after.

But my biggiest problem is the repetitive nature and lois's quick memory loss, meaning Super would say THIS, she would like ok, but next chapter is angry over it again and Super doesn't even use same line. Like the eavesdropping thing, did it once by mistake but heres lois 'OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH you BASTERD HOW COULD YOU". Doesn't even deny what he heard, this whole fic just IS NOT progressive as a whole.

That a awesome!

pretty excellent story it sad to see that it is over

this was a good story couldn’t stop reading it really did like it is sad it is over

fklawur98qaojgrjrj the feels! I love his story so much! You have amazing writing, and not many would be able to tell you are a native Spanish speaker. You have amazing English skills! xD I love it!

Loved it. Please post sequal

Honestly one of the best Superman-fanfics I've ever read. :•)

Brilliant this story was brilliant. I was so bummed to see that the sequel was not completed as well. Anyway, thanks so much for sharing this bit I couldn't stop reading.

Your story is wonderful. You've painted a picture of a truly vulnerable superMAN who finally needs the help of normal humans if he's going to survive. Kuddos. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more.

Will you write a sequel to this story? I'm absolutely begging you to write one. "The Day After" is BRILLIANT.

I for one cannot wait for the sequel! This was a great story and I give you two thumbs up!

Just reread this and it was still as touching as I remembered it to be. Wish the sequel was online? Thoroughly entertaining, Thanks!