I'm not done reading the story yet but I have to review this chapter because it is just so good. Can't even tell that English isn't your first language.

I've gotta say that this is one of the best lines I have ever read:

-'His eyes burst open. “Jason…” he whispered and a broad smile formed on his face. He was going to see his son! He quickly sat up and could hardly contain his joy. Oh, joy of… OW! He clutched his aching side and took deep, calming breaths.'

"Oh, joy of... OW!" made me laugh so hard.

Heading off to read the next chapter...

-(Jacie)-

This was an amazing story! I really hope you start the sequel soon!

I loved it! I don't like when people make Richard look like an ass, because he's obviously not! It's just easier to write him off that way and not have to deal with the fact that Jason would have to get used to having two fathers.

That was a fantastic epilogue, this had a real wholesome ending to it and i luv that, it was fun reading bout them at work after, i felt for CLark wen Perry was coming dwn hard on him but was like yay wen Lois stood up for him

I'm so sad that its reli over, but am 'super' excited about the sequal (sorry bout the pun, couldn't help maself teehee)

Will keep my eye open for the new stories, _

Cee xx

WOW i'm sorry i haven't read and reviewed lately, i have been so busy, but it was worth the wait, that was a gr8 chapter! Sad to see it end, but at least i have the epilouge to read nwo teehee

Luv the connection between Clark and Lois when he was fading (so sad that bit i was filling up lol) One little thing, i felt Clark's rehabilitation was a little rushed, the story was amazing from start to end and i had built a lot of faith in Clark's character and then it all happened reli fast when he went up in the plane, shame that didn't last longer but it was still gr8!

I can't wait to read the sequal that is gunna be so gd, Thanks for writing such a cool fic

Cee xx

You were right, setting the lamp on fire was more interesting lol

God i hpoe he is ok, i wonder what is gunna happen?

Can't wait to read more

Cee xx

AW a sick Clark is so adroable, i have to agree with Lis there lol

Richard is annoyin me, i mean i can't blame him for acting this way, but i guss its coz i want Clark and Lois together that i am tiltied to their side

Can't wait to read on

Cee xx

I kno the baby joke is getting old but it still made me chuckle hehe

Luv the caring side of Lois towards CLark, very sweet, they are meant to be in this universe

Can't wait to read what its going to be like in the house with all four of them lol

Cee xx

That was interesting, its hard listening about the events thro Superman's eyes, the apin and fear he felt :(

God poor both of them, having to deal with a murdering Jason lol, i dont think that would be enough to turn Clark away from his son tho, but your the writer

Cee xx

Iliked all the diff POV's in this chapter! And i am so glad that Clark is ok, well getting better anyway lol

How cute is Jason, 'can we get him burritos?' AW

I am becoming hooked on this fic now hehe

Cee xx

LOL Lois's driving was hilarious, and Clark actuallyfearing for his life haha so gr8!

But on a serious note, god poor Clark, your writin reli allows the reader to grasp the severiy of his condition and pushes all of our concerns to the front of out minds. I really hope he's ok

Cee xx

LOL Superman naked in her bed, any girls dream teehee

Oh no, why can't he fly, gunna read on and find out lo

Still luving this story

Cee xx

Just found this story and i am so glad! Its gr8 so far, luv hoe Lois insisted in helping him and the way she found out he was Supes was even better teehee

Can't wait to read on

Cee xx

No offense, but the transitions are too quick in this chapter. Richard wouldn't just accept Superman's presence, and I don't think he would come to conclusions as quickly

OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD CANT WAIT TO THE SEQUEL I MEAN IT WAS THE BEST SUPERMAN FANFICTION I HAVE EVER WRITTEN. I FINISHED READING IT AT WORK. I KEPT THINKING I HAVE TO SEE IF HE LIVES OR NOT. BUT IT WAS GREAT. I AM ALSO A WRITER AND AM PLANNING ON WRITING SOME FANFICTIONS ALSO. IM GOING TO ADD UR FANFICTION TO MY FAVORITES CAUSES ITS ONE THAT U NEVER GET TIRED OF READING.