Ford did have a dark side. Great story!

I really love your Rodney stories.

Thanks.

Thanks for the story.

Saw your name pop up in on a review, and thought I'd come see... and glad I did! This is a great little story :) I'm always a lover of McKay Whump, and you certainly delivered that in full! I particularly loved this line:

Rodney was well on his way to recovery but ironically was putting the medical staff under more pressure now than when he was in critical condition.

So McKay! Thanks for writing this!

This was very good. I love Rodney whumping stories. And I absolutely love stories with a nice bit of snarkiness between Rodney and Sheppard. Write more soon!

Very well done. The dialog, characterization, and narrative were all excellent.

However (and this is just my opinion) the end seemed a little abrupt. I think that you could continue this story - Sheppard asking Ronon to join the team, Ronon 'learning' what is and is not acceptable in the human military. I would certainly like to see your take on all these and a few other things.

Thanks for having shared this with us.

That was cool. I like who shocked Shep was that Rodney admited he like Ronon. :) Cute. I would have liked to see a little more from Shep though. He was fighting with Rodney and then lost him in a river. He'd be scared and worried. You showed that with him being out early searching but a little internal monolog would have been nice too. But I liked the story.

really nice and totally enjoyable story.

Oh poor Rodney squealing as he falls into the river! I just love Rodney whumping.

Great story

Nice fic. Loved the interaction between Sheppard and McKay and this was a nice look at their thoughts on Ford.

I liked this. Your response to the challenge was well done.