Reviews for Rapids
Catalina H chapter 31 . 10/10
This was good, especially for your first story. I could kinda tell, mainly just with little things though. But like with all other things, writing gets better with experience, so the important thing is to keep writing. You did a great job with this! You managed to incorporate a case, some angst, a little drama, family/team/friend bonding, and humor all into one. I was laughing through the majority. Yes, certain parts seemed a tad OOC, but not overly so. You kept them in character well, and I could picture everything. Loved the banter and bond between Gibbs and Tony, and the Tony/Abby and Gibbs/Ducky talks. It was certainly worth the read. :)
tami chapter 31 . 8/15
amazing story and you to a degree stuck to the original storyline of tony dinozzo though needs a little improvement but all in all great
aslansphoenix chapter 31 . 2/13
Since I started reading NCIS fanfiction a few years ago, I have now read this story five times (I think), I know I favourited it the first time, but I may not have reviewed because I find that usually a pointless thing to do, but you deserve this. If you willingly re-read a story and consistently enjoy it each time then it is a damn good story.
Guest chapter 31 . 1/28
Great job!
Poppy chapter 12 . 9/11/2014
I love the story...but I really hate when Abby punches people. Like really, really hate it. It's not cute, or funny, and no one would accept if anyone regularly punched her, so why is she allowed to do it?
FotoDi chapter 5 . 9/8/2014
What is so unique about being a "son" that there is no FBI agent capable of playing the part undercover?
LoveSamandDean chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
This was a really good story. Loved it
Guest chapter 31 . 9/17/2013
What an amazing, dramatic and emotionally beautiful story.
PgTnr1 chapter 31 . 9/4/2013
By far one of my favorites!
Guest chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
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Meanxruki chapter 31 . 11/3/2012
love this story!
Scat210 chapter 31 . 10/17/2012
Fantastic story, really enjoyed it.
hazelbunny chapter 9 . 5/28/2012
ok, so as i was reading this i was thinking about what i would give undercover agents as a car. i chose a ford truck. when you actually chose a ford truck near the end of the chapter i started laughing. good choice. i can't wait to read more of this story.
anon chapter 15 . 3/16/2012
Honestly, the only OOC things that I can say spring out at me are Tony having so much to do with kids, so comfortably. Other than that, the story's interesting, and I'm enjoying it. I don't think they're especially father-son in canon, myself, but I can read fics like that, if they're good. :)

It's nice reading a fic where they get along, and care enough about each other to try working on issues, or tiptoe along each other's emotional landmines, you know? Particularly Gibbs. So many fics have him being such an outright mean bastard that I don't see how anybody could like him; but your Gibbs is gruff, but caring. That works for me.
Suezanne chapter 15 . 3/8/2012
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