Reviews for Carte Blanche
Kiara-san chapter 2 . 8/21/2006
This is a great start. I really liked the conversation between Anna and Kitty.

Also, I'm not sure if you already know about this, but you might get more feedback if you allow anonymous reviews. The default on the site is to only accept signed reviews. To change this, you would need to log in and go to the reviews section. From there click on anonymous and then press enable. The page should say it was successful. Hope this helps.
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 2 . 8/21/2006
Interesting story. Update soon!

DarkWolf2 chapter 1 . 8/20/2006

the writing is good. I was impressed as the name had made me a little dubious at first but curiosity won out. Perhaps advertise that it is Rogue/Remy centric as you might get more people to stumble on to it.

Anyway, you're writing stle and presentation it good. I just had one complaint, and please don't take this wrong, but you need a little bit more to make the reader want to read more. Maybe if the chapter had been a little longer, or tease the reader a little bit more. However, in saying that, it's still good. I will keep an eye on it. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
18 | « Prev Page 1 2