Reviews for Chained
Luna's Child fanfic chapter 14 . 12/18/2013
Nice story so far. I'll read the rest tomorrow. :)
unknown chapter 11 . 10/21/2013
I htought a predator does not kill incconent prey -_-
unknown chapter 5 . 10/21/2013
Well this is a ok story but her reaction to dead people seems unreal she just heard him say i gutted a freaking family!
unknown chapter 4 . 10/21/2013
Dang hope she does not die
unknown chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
this will be interesting
DeathlyIceMaiden chapter 8 . 9/26/2013
She's not too smart...if I remember right yai'lo told her that wetland is experimenting with xenomorphs. Naive she is. They are going to kill her if they don't get info on yai'lo.
Rapidash150 chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
Nice story I love it soooo much
yautja lover chapter 48 . 1/15/2013
Why change it i loved the story hope the new one is as good as this one or better please dont give up writing im writing a book aswell and even if i get bored with it sometimes i don't give up on my story you shouldn't eather you have a talant don't throw it away please from one writer to another don't GIVE UP you are a fantastic writer im not even sure you will see this but if you do what I just wrote was not a lie and im sure many will agree that you are a amazing author so dont give up writing PLEASE sincerely yautja lover.
NileQueenAset chapter 5 . 9/3/2012
I am loving this, very goo read, indeed!
SexyZexy chapter 12 . 6/16/2011
This has a pretty good storyline, but you're making Yai'lo too human, he's a predator, but you're making him use human phrases. Also there is too much dialogue for Lauren, I don't think humans speak out loud all the time and can change moods so quickly, you make her character as if she can't think and must speak. Other than that and a few grammar and spelling mistakes, it's pretty good :)
midnight84118 chapter 48 . 5/25/2011
lol can i get the link from you plz
KitKatLove chapter 47 . 2/4/2011
i really like thi story. your doing a good job with it. im a new writer on here and happened to come across this story and i really got into it
Legal Humor chapter 7 . 10/29/2010
What the hell...40 aliens! lol that's WAY over the top. It would have been funny if he was just bluffing. Though he did say he hated lying...

Hm.

-Humor
Legal Humor chapter 6 . 10/29/2010
Either Lauren is really brave for yelling at something that could easily rip her head or she is perhaps just a little crazy. Either way "Yeah Lauren!" Man Yai'lo is acting like a major asshole so far. -.-

-Humor

P.s: *Go back a couple reviews* Yay I'm reviewer #400! lol do I get a badass prize or what! :D

Jk.
Legal Humor chapter 5 . 10/29/2010
Ha ha I wonder what people thought if they saw the meat just floating in the air going from house to house.

Oh my god...SUPER MEAT! xD

-Humor
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