|Reviews for Whitewater|
| NillyNarwhal chapter 32 . 9/27/2017
I know you haven't updated this or been active on this site for a long while now, but I figured I'd just leave a review anyway.
So crazy to think I was still in grade school when this came out. I guess with all that time between then and now, you may not like this fanfic as much anymore, but I, and clearly many others, loved it and all its qualities.
Good luck with what you're doing in life~
| Lilybud chapter 1 . 1/28/2017
I like the varied pacing, and the narrative was just right, the characters in-character, and the writing very well done with great syntax (I especially liked Raven's rule about cooking)! I liked the insights, and how natural the situation felt, and the ending about Raven changing her room was a nice tough.
| MetrionWarrior chapter 23 . 7/12/2016
Is that a Xiaolin Showdown reference? Dojo the temple dragon and the kids (Clay, Kimiko, Omi, and Rai) on the quest to find the Shen Gong Wu. Sith-Knight Galen additions to beastboy's list
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/12/2016
WAS THAT A FREAKING HOMESTUCK REFERENCE. THAT WAS A FREAKING HOMESTUCK REFERENCE WASN'T IT. SOBER!GAMZEE REFERENCE.
| ineedname chapter 32 . 1/8/2016
even though, I'm pretty sure you're on this site anymore, I just want to say, I love how you did the Titians. especially beast boy.
| konggodamera chapter 28 . 9/2/2015
i haven't encountered a short I didn't like so far, these are all great
| Robaezica W chapter 32 . 7/11/2015
I really loved this!
| dreamysleeper chapter 4 . 3/20/2015
GOSH DARN THIS STORY IS AMAZING. I LOVE HOW EXPLORE THEIR RELATIONSHIPS HOW THEY ARE A /FAMILY/ HOW THEY ARE MORE THAN ROMANTIC FEELINGS GOOD GOD I LOVE THIS
| BlackRoseAngel7172 chapter 32 . 12/29/2014
I must say I absolutely love this story! Although it saddens me to see that there aren't anymore chapters. Would you be willing to start writing more chapters? You can PM me with the response.
| RavenSerendipity chapter 32 . 10/15/2014
You made me laugh so much with this... :) it was good. It was gooood. :D
| RavenSerendipity chapter 6 . 10/13/2014
I love ravens list. :)
| Guest chapter 32 . 7/6/2014
Thank you you made me laugh and cry how you write inspires me my username is Celestial Valykrie or something like that I must admit I haven't been on in a while but it would be nice if you pm me if you don't that's ok to I would understand
| CleoArrow chapter 32 . 7/5/2014
I love love love these little stories! Please tell me you will update them again one day! Your last update was on my birthday! You can't leave it there!
| CleoArrow chapter 28 . 7/5/2014
Tag, you're it. XD I laughed so hard.
| CleoArrow chapter 17 . 7/5/2014
My heart just melted at that last line. He named it Raven! 3