Reviews for Whitewater
ShinobiCyrus chapter 4 . 8/21/2006
without a doubt, the best was 'Girl Talk'. Heh. That stuff is awesome. I can't wait to write the camping fic with you. Uh...what the hell do we name it, anyways? I can't keep calling it 'the camping fic'.

Anyways, love ya

lesjeux chapter 4 . 8/21/2006
It was nice. The Flyswatter one was amusing, and 'Midwinter' is really good...poor Robin, hehe. You have great ideas.
BrotillaTheHun chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
AWW...that was adorable. I liked how you fleshed out GO! and gave it more depth. Great job on the dialogue and BB and Raven's characterizations. I could definitely see him roughing it out in the wilderness because he had nobody to turn to and her being the practical one. Great job on the imagery and I loved how it ended with her asking to have her room next to his; VERY cute. Keep up the great work!
BrotillaTheHun chapter 2 . 8/18/2006
Cute drabbles. I liked the first one and how BB and Robin seemd to be getting along. They're always at odds in most stories, I like the idea of them relating on such a sensitive issue. The bit wiht Robin trying to write a note for Star was hillarious, I loved his last line of dialogue. VERY cute scene during snowblind. Keep up the great work!
BrotillaTheHun chapter 3 . 8/18/2006
HA...very cute. Interesting concept for the story. I liked how it was mostly from Raven's POV. Great job on the imagery during the gun battles. Very well done. Loved the dialogue too. Keep up the good work!
Kayasuri-n chapter 3 . 8/18/2006
I'm giggling at the idea of the Titans playing laser tag for Beast Boy's birthday. And enjoying the mental image.

I'm going to keep an eye on this... it's going in my favorites.
roniloveu chapter 2 . 8/18/2006

these r cute

ilik cy's ending comment to robin in 004

and the major bb/rae in 005
lesjeux chapter 3 . 8/18/2006
Nice 'fighting' scene, and Robin really is brilliant but I don't like him much. Good one!]
lesjeux chapter 2 . 8/18/2006
The Valentines one was funny, and the last one was cute. I think soymilk can go bad, I hate milk too. I mean, the smell just makes me want to throw up.0_o
lesjeux chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
It's really sweet, loved it!
Smirks of Apathy chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
Definitely well written. I'm glad you know its unlikely, because it is. However, its definitely cute, and this is coming from a non-shipper. Some facts dont match up though, because Ravens room is on a different floor than Beast Boy's [in the show] and several other things, but ignoring that, this went well. I look forward to reading more stuff from you.
toxic-dreamer-2 chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
COOL...this was very interesting. I couldn't help wondering after I watched the episode 'Titans go' where Beastboy and Raven had been or how long Beastboy had been on his own. This was very interesting and brought a small yet satisfied smile to my face. LOVE 'One Which Makes The Heart Run Over'...BTW..._.
ShinobiCyrus chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Sorry I haven't replyed with that joint TT story, it's in wps format, and the only computer in this house that can read it is already on its way to Minnesota.

I bow to the Queen of Titans,

-Your annoying little Bro, Cy
Sapphiregirl chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
Aww. This was really sweet. I can SO see Raven doing something like letting BB stay with her.

I never really thought about where any of them were living before they had the Tower. Very nicely done. _

I'll definitely be looking forward to updates. Happy writing!


P.S. I'll be sure to keep in mind your advice about the whitewater rafting-it's something my mom would decide to do.
uninterestingpenname chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
i like that. they never really showed what happened after go! right? well i like this idea that this is what happened. and i like the last sentence. i love oneshots, and i think your'e a great writer.
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