Reviews for Rise of The Village Hidden in Hell
Guest chapter 4 . 7/12
You're means you are
I saw it quite often in you fic and alltjough its not my place to say
Som of those you should repleace with "your" for example , you wrote "you're turn, sasuke"
Which would mean "you are turn, sasuke"
You see what i mean?
SuperWhoVengePottLokiLockLin chapter 29 . 3/5/2016
"NOT A DUST BUNNY!" Fucking almost killed me. I was eating Chex cereal and I read that and it caught me so off guard... I broke out into a fit of uncontrollable laughter. Oh man, I hurt myself laughing so hard, and I was crying and *shakes head* I couldn't even think about it without giggling for like five minutes after I stopped laughing. Now it is to the point I'm only smiling like a lunatic, still want to lmfao though. Anyway...I'm going back to finish the story. I just couldn't continue reading without saying anyway. Thank for that. Thank you so much.
DarkPurpleGoth13 chapter 33 . 3/5/2014
This story is AWESOME! I can't wait for the rewrite! And you're AWESOME too!
N Harmonic chapter 33 . 9/29/2013
how can it be the first time if this is your only story?
HalfwayParanoid chapter 33 . 7/18/2013
WHAAATT!? I read all of that and stayed up late to see this? Geez, and it was getting REAL GOOD.
leafstone chapter 33 . 4/17/2013
great story can't wait for the rewright.
tarrangar chapter 3 . 1/3/2013
ameterasu burn even other flames so burn your dragons stomach its angry again
tarrangar chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
brown flames now your dragon will attack you if you feed the flames to it remember what happened when natsu ate them
noname00 chapter 33 . 4/25/2012
Well it was fun reading this but I do wish that you would of put discontined or something in the summary. Aside from that the fic though incomplete was great and I loved it especially Lunchimaru
Yumitsume chapter 33 . 3/2/2012
I would like to inform you that this story is very good and I would like it if you continued it. ;]
KaiKi09 chapter 14 . 6/30/2011
How come Sakura only got cats as her summoning and Sasuke got dragons?
SuperiorShortness chapter 10 . 10/20/2009
Sigh, another cliche Orochimaru marks naruto...
Cyraxr chapter 33 . 1/29/2009
Not a bad story though I can see why you want to rewrite it because while I was reading it I noticed it seemed to jump forward a lot suddenly and with out explanation or notice. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
Terumiu chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Your story is great, save for a few grammar and vocab mistakes.

Phiix of the Dark Soul chapter 2 . 10/4/2008
i am only on chapter 2 and i already am hooked
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